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Things Are Not Always What They Seem
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Beautiful home
Carpet wall to wall
Three children playing
Down the hall
Closet full of
The latest design
Furniture polished
'Till it shines

Husband comes home
Smile on his face
Everything in order
Nothing out of place
She has everything
Money can give
What she doesn't have
Is the will to live

© Linda Hill



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 Reviews of "Things Are Not Always What They Seem"
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Excellent write that captures the frustration and fear of being depressed; I know about it; I've been there. Keep on writing, and I'll be praying for you, too! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Another excellent piece, though sad...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
excellent! the beauty of life transcends materialism and though surrounded by monetary objects, in essence we have nothing...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Depression only gets worst if it's not treated
Only the one sick can change their life with help
Great write my friend........

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
This is so GOOD!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
The will to live is there, she just needs the bright shinning light of love to help her regain it. Beautiful words.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Soul touching Linda!!

This speaks volumes to me...know the feeling!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
How very true Linda.
You say it well. Excellent
poem! Brava! Sad too. Of course
I assume you know about
depression.
From a fellow once ill person,
Becca

Reviewed by Lee Garrett
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Man! Talk about hitting you between the eyes.

Reviewed by J. Hart (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
How very true - things are NOT always what they seem. We paint a pretty picture to make things "seem" okay to the outside world, and when we come back into our four walls, all hell breaks loose. It's an incredibly sad feeling to feel so trapped, yet we're the only ones who really know it. Awesome write, Linda, and no one could have said it better. Warmly, jh

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Startling truth of some lives. Depression is a sorry way to live. Well done, Linda. You bring this sadness alive with your words.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Wow.
You never cease to absolutely amaze me.
What heart you have!
Love,
John

Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Wonderful "hit home" type poem. Love it.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
This is so sad, Linda but no one writes and expresses the sad poems more beautifully and with any more dignity. I once felt like the woman in your poem, oft times suffering from depression, but I find strength in my writing and my friends. Take care and God bless you for your kind words and kind heart.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
That's sad Linda!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Powerful and so sad my friend.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Powerful and so real.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Linda,
My friend this one is so emotional
and so true for so many.
Thank you for your insight
in your work.
Peggy

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Well done, Linda! So many are without a zest for life. The will to be alive and aware is wonderful, especially for those who have food and good health. I'm remembering some of your other poems and it seems that you are blessed with a deep appreciation for life. Good for you!

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
To have the will to live
is so important and money
doent buy that.


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