AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  John Burns, iLinda Alexander, iRiley Blake, iMary Lynn Plaisance, iDr. Patrick ODougherty, iRoger Vizi, iPamela Ackerson, iKarin Adams, iLaura Cavanaugh, iTom Kitt, i

  Home > Inspirational > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Annabel Sheila

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 332 Titles
· 3,945 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
· Member Since: May, 2008

Annabel Sheila, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Cinquain
by Annabel Sheila → (All Poetry by Annabel Sheila)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

The Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of 2,4,6,8,2 syllables....love it! Here's my first attempt....

Poem Artwork

 

She’s trapped
Within her mind
There’s no escaping
The ravaging brutality
Of time
 
 
- Living with Dementia by Annabel Sheila
Want to review or comment on this poem?

Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Cinquain"
Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on September 6, 2010
A few short words yet so intense. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel
Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on September 5, 2010
A wonderful job and good deep subject matter.
Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on September 5, 2010
Very clever Annabel, and with a poignant message about the sadness of Dementia
blessings to you
David
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
A sad story captured so well in your cinquain.

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
You must have visited my mother this morning:-)Patrick
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
Quite powerful, Annabel.
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Wow! So often the fewer words the stronger the message... Very good, my friend.
Mark
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I could spend all day observing your photograph. Difficult to stand by and watch loved ones slip away into a void...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Your poem captures it well!
Sleek and well said ~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I am not familiar with this style of poetry. However it had the correct syllables. And it was very good, IMHO.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
In my humble opinion, this is a fine cinquain that expresses your chosen theme very well, Annabel. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I think Annabel you have captured a picture very well. Thanks for adding the last item on Dementia. It makes the piece that much more poignant.
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Captivating use of words. But, I have to ask, is it time that is being brutal or is it disease?
New Poetry by Annabel Sheila
Poem Image
In This Place
Poem Image
The little bunky in the woods is calling to me...must go there soon...
A Wondrous Wintry Night
Poem Image
Mom and Dad have been gone a long time, but at this time of the year I feel their presence more than ever...
Impossible Christmas Wish
Poem Image
Remembrance Day next Sunday...a sad reminder of all we''ve lost...
Remember
Poem Image
The spookiest night of the year approaches...cant wait to treat the ghouls and goblins.
Happy Halloween
Poem Image
I'd like to introduce Ziggy...he's doing a fine job of filling the hole my precious Allie left in my heart...
Five Pounds of Light
Poem Image
Mi'kmaq word pronounced "Al SUT"...it means "Own"....
Alsutg
Poem Image
Haven't penned much poetry in a while...burdens weighed me down...but the brisk Autumn breeze today is truly inspirational...
Solace
Popular Poetry (Inspirational)
  1.  Cowboy in Heaven
  2.  I'm Thankful
  3.  The Fragments of Hatred...
  4.  Dolly Parton
  5.  HELLO SEPTEMBER
  6.  YOUR...AIR
  7.  MY COAT
  8.  A Praying Wife
  9.  The Apple Orchard
  10.  My Name Is , I Am
  11.  The Rose
  12.  A Letter to Emily
  13.  Heaven’s Fishing Hole
  14.  War
  15.  The Heartfelt Gift
  16.  In Awe
  17.  Creator Of The Stars
  18.  What Are We...Really?
  19.  77 YEARS AGO, TODAY
  20.  My Glowing Fire Fly
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive by Margaret Evans

This exceptional book, Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive, has the perfect thoughts and words for birthdays, graduations, engagements, marriages, and any life celebration or family tradition.  
Member BookAds

Stuff You Can Say Everyday by D. Mullis

My son wrote a book of his personal, one liner quotes. Never underestimate the power of simple statements! A very interesting read!  
Member BookAds

Lo Estoy Sintiendo by Darryl Jenkins

Como Lo Siente Mi Corazón Poemas Que Inspiran El Alma  
Member BookAds
Authors A-Z: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z
Featured Authors New to AuthorsDen? Add AuthorsDen to Your Site Share AD Need Help? About Us

Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.