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Shine inside your self.(Inspired by my son.)
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He tried to decorate himself to everybody's taste
he copied everybody else to keep up with their pace.

The soul inside his temple
it never felt at ease
but still he did it all their way
struggling hard to please.

And he wore the colours that they liked inside him,
and he wore the face that they approved of too,
and the stony walls that they picked out he stayed in,
while he lived inside their favourite shades of blue .

His furnishings made most the world contented,
they smiled to know he did things all their way,
but inside, alone ,his spirit felt demented,
and at times,his heart it wished hard NOT to stay.

The peers whom he looked up to were ecstatic
as he decorated just the way they chose
for his aim to please them ever was emphatic
that his heart would strive to love and please all those.

Every night inside the chambers of his dwelling
(in the temple that held his own soul's wealth)
a feeling so alone and dark was telling
him
he was
a stranger to ...himself.

To change himself
he knew his peers would scorn him,
and the fear of that it hurt in every place,
and to walk alone on roads he felt unsure in
took all his courage and all of God's grace.

So he took some steps that day
and tore the walls down
and he threw the furnishings they loved outside,
and he shook all decorations to the floor ground
ripping out and burning up false pride,
'Till
his temple held but nothing when he finished,
and the ones he knew all turned to run away.
while the ocean tide inside is eyes diminished,
and his rooms illuminated as he pray.

He prayed for all the wisdom that he needed
to decorate his life with honest love
and a miracle of beauty then succeeded
for each temple room... with God... glowed brightly of.

The moral of this poem is
'Shine inside your self ,'
decorate to please 'The One' you should,
keep nothing in your heart except
God's own wealth...
for then your soul is always housed ...with Good. 


 


Footnote.


My 32 year old son asked me to write this poem,it's based on his life.


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 Reviews of "Shine inside your self.(Inspired by my son.)"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 6, 2005
A most inspiring offering, Kay. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
Well written Kay!!
Love tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
It's beautiful and moving.
I enjoyed this so much.
Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
Kay, the inner battle to be accepted vs to be true to ourselves is lifelong, indeed.

My jaw is just now rising to its original place... this is beyond profound. I fully agree with Jude. Real liberation, true joy, is when we are who we are, not based on anyone elses directive, including societies... maybe ESPECIALLY societies. This is an amazingly awe-inspiring piece. My best to your son. katy xox

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
when we live our lives without caring what others think about us we are truely liberated for our actions and self-perceptions are now based on the inner wisdom of our own hearts and spirits ...

a very inspired and well written message in this poem ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
It may be based on your son's life, but it stands as a testament for many, many more lost souls out there who, for whatever reason decided to live for themselves and not othhers. Very well-writtenn and articulated.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
Trying to become the person who pleases everyone is a futile effort. No one really likes the person that they turn someone into and in the end they become bored with them. Your son got smart and he realized that the person he had to please was himself and the relationship he needed to build upon was the one he has with God. Very nice write, Kay. It is nice to read you again.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
At 32 your son has many more years to get mom to write more on his life...he has seen some depression in his first 32 but I hope with the great mom he has, he will see less of it in his next 32...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed on September 4, 2005

A touching story of one's soul journey to freedom and awareness.
"Shine inside your self.(Inspired by my son.)" flows from the
fountain of wisdom through art and beauty.

I salute You, Poet!



Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
Excellent write. well versed. phrasing was superb, flow & ryhme exceptional..and of course, the message was poignant.

we all have our masks, it's just hard to see your Self in the mirror when you have one on.

TX

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
Kay, through tears of joy, after the initial sadness, I applaud this magnificent poem! I can't tell you how splendid this is for I don't have the right accolades to convey my feelings. A special thanks to you for sharing this, and to your son for asking you to! My sweet friend this is an inspired gem! One to go in my library!



Love and hugs,

Eileen


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