He tried to decorate himself to everybody's taste he copied everybody else to keep up with their pace.
The soul inside his temple it never felt at ease but still he did it all their way struggling hard to please.
And he wore the colours that they liked inside him, and he wore the face that they approved of too, and the stony walls that they picked out he stayed in, while he lived inside their favourite shades of blue .
His furnishings made most the world contented, they smiled to know he did things all their way, but inside, alone ,his spirit felt demented, and at times,his heart it wished hard NOT to stay.
The peers whom he looked up to were ecstatic as he decorated just the way they chose for his aim to please them ever was emphatic that his heart would strive to love and please all those.
Every night inside the chambers of his dwelling (in the temple that held his own soul's wealth) a feeling so alone and dark was telling him he was a stranger to ...himself.
To change himself he knew his peers would scorn him, and the fear of that it hurt in every place, and to walk alone on roads he felt unsure in took all his courage and all of God's grace.
So he took some steps that day and tore the walls down and he threw the furnishings they loved outside, and he shook all decorations to the floor ground ripping out and burning up false pride, 'Till his temple held but nothing when he finished, and the ones he knew all turned to run away. while the ocean tide inside is eyes diminished, and his rooms illuminated as he pray.
He prayed for all the wisdom that he needed to decorate his life with honest love and a miracle of beauty then succeeded for each temple room... with God... glowed brightly of.
The moral of this poem is 'Shine inside your self ,' decorate to please 'The One' you should, keep nothing in your heart except God's own wealth... for then your soul is always housed ...with Good.
Footnote.
My 32 year old son asked me to write this poem,it's based on his life.
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Reviews of "Shine inside your self.(Inspired by my son.)"
It's beautiful and moving.
I enjoyed this so much.
Thanks for sharing this.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
Kay, the inner battle to be accepted vs to be true to ourselves is lifelong, indeed.
My jaw is just now rising to its original place... this is beyond profound. I fully agree with Jude. Real liberation, true joy, is when we are who we are, not based on anyone elses directive, including societies... maybe ESPECIALLY societies. This is an amazingly awe-inspiring piece. My best to your son. katy xox
when we live our lives without caring what others think about us we are truely liberated for our actions and self-perceptions are now based on the inner wisdom of our own hearts and spirits ...
a very inspired and well written message in this poem ...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
It may be based on your son's life, but it stands as a testament for many, many more lost souls out there who, for whatever reason decided to live for themselves and not othhers. Very well-writtenn and articulated.
Trying to become the person who pleases everyone is a futile effort. No one really likes the person that they turn someone into and in the end they become bored with them. Your son got smart and he realized that the person he had to please was himself and the relationship he needed to build upon was the one he has with God. Very nice write, Kay. It is nice to read you again.
At 32 your son has many more years to get mom to write more on his life...he has seen some depression in his first 32 but I hope with the great mom he has, he will see less of it in his next 32...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
A touching story of one's soul journey to freedom and awareness.
"Shine inside your self.(Inspired by my son.)" flows from the
fountain of wisdom through art and beauty.
Kay, through tears of joy, after the initial sadness, I applaud this magnificent poem! I can't tell you how splendid this is for I don't have the right accolades to convey my feelings. A special thanks to you for sharing this, and to your son for asking you to! My sweet friend this is an inspired gem! One to go in my library!
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I enjoyed this so much.
Thanks for sharing this.
My jaw is just now rising to its original place... this is beyond profound. I fully agree with Jude. Real liberation, true joy, is when we are who we are, not based on anyone elses directive, including societies... maybe ESPECIALLY societies. This is an amazingly awe-inspiring piece. My best to your son. katy xox
a very inspired and well written message in this poem ...
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Sherry
A touching story of one's soul journey to freedom and awareness.
"Shine inside your self.(Inspired by my son.)" flows from the
fountain of wisdom through art and beauty.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
we all have our masks, it's just hard to see your Self in the mirror when you have one on.
TX
Love and hugs,
Eileen