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For an old soldier
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
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Old soldiers make me cry this poem is for them. KPD.

We didn't ask 'what for?'

Old mate,

we didn't ask 'what for!'

we just charged in loyally

to fight their 'bloody war.'

we were full of fire and grit

when we marched in to fight,

we didn't ask 'what for,' old mate, 

we both just  yelled 'ALRIGHT!'

The passion of our county burned

for friends who felt war's blow,

so when they needed help from us,

we raised our hands to go,

and though our loved ones cringed in fear,

we never paused to stay,

we were just like heroes mate,

as we both marched... away.

And neither of us wondered

' IF there was ANOTHER way?'

Who were we to question them

(those LEADERS of the day?)

But old mate,

looking back upon your distant grave;

I have to wonder at the cost

so many young men paid.

We didn't ask for 'other ways'

when they asked us 'to fight'

and now

I'm having nightmares of

that battle...every night.

My mates around me blown to bits

they're in my memory,

along with parent's faces filled

with tears

for me

to see.

We went in unquestioning

and stormed Gallipoli,

and now the war I'm fighting is

the one
 
inside of me.

I didn't ask 'what for' old mate,

and I returned alone,

perhaps I should

have asked it mate?

(if only I had known.)

That place they sent us to was wrong

(a bungle at its worst,)

like 'lambs to slaughter' lives were gone,

with you, one of the first.

Its Anzac day and I am old

but still I try to march,

no one sees you with me mate

as I hobble past,

but a day has not gone by

that we've been apart,

because I've kept you with me mate,

right here INSIDE my heart.

I 'was lucky' (so they say,)

I survived that war,

but every day since you were killed,

old mate,

I've asked...'what for?'

I survived to battle on

beyond that Turkish shore

I'm alive but you are gone

and  now...THAT is MY war.

I'm standing here at sunrise Mate

on one more Anzac morn,

I listen to a bugle

and through tears see medals worn,

I glimpse the wide-eyed children

as they WONDER at our WAR...

then I feel it mate...the answer:

It was THEM we did it FOR.

 

 


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 Reviews of "For an old soldier"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 14, 2012
SPLENDID! YES...WE LIVE THE HARDSHIPS OF TODAY...FOR THE SMILES OF TOMORROW AND IF WE ARE SO BLESSED BY THE GOOD LORD, WE GET TO SEE SOME OF THEM. A WORK THAT TOOK ME TO 'OTHER' BATTLEFIELDS. A REMARKABLE WORK ABOUT...'SOLDIERS'. SO WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS. LOVE & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 5, 2011
Wow. So well-written. I love it. Up there with the best of war poets-Owen, Sassoon, Kipling, Graves, etc.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 4, 2011
very moving and well written tribute ...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
Beautiful tribute, Kay!!! Truly heartfelt....

Anna

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on August 1, 2011
Kay this is perfect, and without doubt one the best you have wriiten,
I really loved this one, so full of sadness and compassion, you can almost see the tears in this old fellows eye,
YOUR number one fan,
and Pommie Pal Steve

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on August 1, 2011
So much thought and heart in this poem. I was entranced with it as it progressed. It is so real and down-to-earth, and the ending is spectacular!

Connie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 31, 2011
They went, they fought, they didn't question,
they were brave and true...and some came home alive...some.
This is fine tribute, Kay, fine indeed.

John

ps: hacking is always horrible,
you have my support and sympathy
jf

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 31, 2011
Excellently thought out, Kay...a very well done tribute to all soldiers everywhere...Ed (sorry to read about your hacking as well)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 31, 2011
It is so very sad that man has learned nothing from all of this. A meaningful and touching write, Kay. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 31, 2011
As a son of one of those brave soldiers who fought in WWII and also the author of a book of his life and my mother's during that war...this write hit home and with a deep regret that he died before I truly understood the sacrifice that he and so many like him made. Great job here Kay...
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