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Shut out....just a poem
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
  
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I tried ,
I tried
with all my heart
of your life to be a part
but....
you would not invite me in,
and so....outside....
that's where I've been.


Shut outside your world of glass
a world that has no door to pass,
a world so like a crystal globe,
the gypsie's ball I long to probe.

Aware That I can not get in,
Aware I'll never touch your skin

aware you've placed me well outside...
a place my tears
wont need ....to hide.

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 Reviews of "Shut out....just a poem"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
very poignant write!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Kay,
A beautiful, poignant poem
~Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Great poem, wonderful flow.

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Excellent write, my friend... so well written...
Hugs
Jenni

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
6-18-03

YA Better SHOUT IT OUT Or You Won't Even Be Able To Write This You Wrote!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Ha! Kay and you tell me to change the moth ending;-)! You can never be outside of anything you are too special! so
there!;-) (thanks for missing me;-)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Kay, this is painful and powerful! (Sniff) Great poem!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
God, Kay, you've plumped my sorrow side, with your bewitching write, sadly meserizing, achingly relatable. :)

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
truely beautifuly written
such feeling,, i love this..
take care sweetheart
steve x

Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Oh Kay, this is soooo sad. Much heartfelt indeed! Hope it's just fictional.

May Lu a.k.a Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003
This was so lovely and sad, just beautiful verses here,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Kay, beautiful yet sad poem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
heartbreaking write......know the feeling!!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Another great write, Kay--this time it touches the heart with sadness...

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
yep,that's how it goes sometimes...very good emotions put into words!!!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Well done, Kay. I am glad it is not about me...because I unhinge the doors and completely remove them. :)
Amor

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Super write Kay! I have to confess that I am one who often does not let people in. It's hard for me to trust others with my intimate thoughts, feelings, and emotions.

~Joseph

Reviewed on June 18, 2003
((((kay)))))

(((HUGS))) heartbreaking write, o, so sad

love,

karla. :(

Reviewed on June 18, 2003
heartbreaking write! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :(


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