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Heartache.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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once upon a bad day.

 

 

There is a pain inside of me

So  STRONG it can not die,

yet hides so well, no one can see,

and feel it.... only I.  


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 Reviews of "Heartache."
Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
kay, (((KAY!)), oh, fiction, perhpas, but moving and so much within these few words, you somehow just KNOW!
you are special and a fine writer/human being and you make us feel...and care!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Glad it's fiction in your life. Strong write.

Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Yes, this touched me so deeply, I loved how you expressed this so clearly, and so well,

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
A excellant deeply moving and profound work!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Deep inner pain is always undetectable by others,

Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
This is Excellent work. :)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Short but profound write...superb!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
very profound!!

Reviewed on June 19, 2003
This was really sad Kay, hope you'll feel better soon.

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Gas will do that to you!... Had to break the tension;-)I hope you aren't really feeling THAT badly!a strong write as my response shows!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Short, yet very profound. Nice write.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
6-19-03

Like Evil Be Gone, Pain Be Gone_

Let Only Beauty(God) Surround Me!

TRASK

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Glad it is fiction. Well done. Mirrors many lives, unfortunately.

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
excellent kay, you see what i mean when i tell you that you have a gift for saying so much with so few words.. i honestly envy that talent,
your pommy pal steve

Reviewed on June 19, 2003
This is so sad, Kay...too many woman walk around like this...slaughtered in many ways.... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear


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