An evening with you...
if only that could be,
then leaving this blue
would be a certainty.
Taking steps accross those stars to touch a glimpse of you
how could I ever try
to visulize YOUR hue?
BLINDNESS
has no light to sight
heaven's sparkling sprinkle...
but touch me with one breath from you,
and I could view God's own eye's twinkle.
An evening with you...
such dream could not come true ,
what symphony
dare play
for
the
ears
fears
channel through?
yet dream of it...I do.
An evening...
with you.
Would stardust cling on broken wing?
Would silver light bathe in blight?
Would honeymoon croon blue?
none of these,would do.
Still... dream will bring
me flight of wing,
and lonely blight change to delight...
I dream tonight
sweet dream...tonight,
An evening...with you.
Kay, long time since I last read you...:-), but I have added you to the tracker, so now you cannot get away. Love this write and excellent challenge piece. It is beautifully romantic - although I don't see now bed slapping going on, LOL ~Trish~
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
This is extremely beautiful my dear friend. you made is so wonderful. Thanks for your wonderful participation
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Sweet write and response to the challenge.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
The most unique and creative response I've read ... well done Kay!
Suspenseful and close to home, Rain of Deception 2 will leave you in Tears. Much like Part 1, this will shocking sequel will keep you on the edge of your fingertips.
Rovella is a beautiful woman with a cold heart whom blames herself for an unfortunate old family secret that is literally ruining her life. This secret impedes a gorgeous woman from having happiness in her childhood, and throughout her life. Dark sec
Rovella is a beautiful woman with a cold heart whom blames herself for an unfortunate old family secret that is literally ruining her life. This secret impedes a gorgeous woman from having happiness in her childhood, and throughout her life. Dark sec
~Joseph
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I hope all is well. your pommy pal steve