Relinquished. Written 2000 (one short verse) (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2003

Kay.. in so few words you have said a ton! and retained your marvelous style.. stay and help us catch these criminals.. you poor thing.. god, I can't wait til they GET THEIRS! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

short and to the point Kay. just wondering are you using a firewall, this might solve your hacker problems. peace

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

Short but very powerful!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

economically expressive thought... well done!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

You stay strong okay...hey I moved up...get in...and lets fly away okay!!
There is enough room for you and your worries okay!! We will feed your worries to the sharks....like Ron did with the toilet paper to scare them away!!
Hehehehe!!

Now Be strong okay!!
Hope you get things worked out!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Strong message in few words!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

I hope it's not goodbye.
Much love from...........Ron

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

I certainly hope that you will continue to post and that the hacker stops playing with your machine. You have such power in such brief lines.
Amor

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Very profound, in very few words. Excellent!

(And, thank you for your reviews and encouragement of me. I've just subscribed your pages.)

Peace,
Bob

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Interesting!...

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Excellent - well said.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Powerful!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Bravo this is good.
LM

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Kay this is great, and you shouldn't stop posting!

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Hi Kay
What a powerful minimalist style tear-jerker Lady! I thought I was smiling, then
I cried. (Do you mean "simple" in the last verse?) Love Vicky

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

I am still pretty upset about the hack attack on my computer so I may not write for a while I am trying to get over it but their is someone very frightening around and from what everyone has told me they are very active in this sort of crime,I can handle most things but this is something I can't handle,it is just too much,it is terrifying.
I am very upset today by this so please excuse me,I just don't know what to do.
I am in shock.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Excellent, short and so powerful, love it,

Reindeer