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Torn to ribbons...one heart. (fiction)
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
  
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There upon the floor

you rummage with your claw

through ribbons bleeding raw

( fleshy trinket slashed to gore)

 paw and gnaw,

you snip it all...

 the remnant

                    of 

                     my heart.
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 Reviews of "Torn to ribbons...one heart. (fiction)"
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Descriptive and powerful piece!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Excellent, strong write.
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Hi Kay,
Ouch is right...
Glad this is only fiction.
Very creative with the
red....

Powerful write....


Hugs,
Trixie :)


Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Powerful...and very painful..
You are amazing and, this, this caught me by the throat and wouldn't let go, in a way...you know?
Kay, you awe...
xxoo
m.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
What an intense, sharp edged poem! Bravo!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Excellent !

TRASK
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Excellent, Kay. Powerfully expressed!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Very hard-hitting write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Bleeding Ha?

We are on the same page girl!!

You missed the "Beach Party"....lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Powerful work of true excellence..

Justin
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
powerful stuff from you, kay; i hope it is only fiction... well done, my dear ozzie friend! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Ouch, glad it's fiction. Powerful expression of pain.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Hey very profound write!!!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Powerful, strong write!
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
wow, so strong and compelling to read.....
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Ooooooh aaaaaaaah a powerful statement, and aw shucks i hope it is fiction, for you, not fact.

Very profound write mate
Hugs
Ch'erie
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