If I give you the muscle that beats inside my chest, (the one that pumps and thumps and pounds, without a moments rest.) If I give you that muscle... with its valves and chambers too, will you promise not to crush it, or break it clear in two? F o r … I cannot let you have it, unless you hold it dear, (as dear as ALL the world to you, f o r e v e r , with YOURS near). And… IF… you say you 'promise’, my heart is YOURS to take, but know... you CANNOT give it back, or EVER... let it ...B R E A K .
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Reviews of "For him,a valentine poem .( my old work redone)"
Ohhhh Kay..this is such a magnificent write..indeed our hearts a re strong but at the same time so bloody fragile..don't ya reckon'
Thanks kiddo for this great write..loved it!!
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Very compassionate poetic write - beautiful my friend!!
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Thanks kiddo for this great write..loved it!!
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Love is positively the most risky thing innit, still we do it.
Top poem and I'm glad you revamped it TY
Hugs Ch'erie
Thanks for being Kay...
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them....great poem..floria
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Such a lovely write...
Hope all has been well
with you dear lady!!!
Hugs,
Trixie :)
Just love your litle guyes at the bottom!!
Love Tinka
Beautiful....