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For him,a valentine poem .( my old work redone)
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Muscle power.

If I give you the muscle that beats inside my chest,
(the one that pumps
and thumps and pounds,
without a moments rest.)
If I give you that muscle...
with its valves and chambers too,
will you promise not to crush it,
or break it clear in two?
F o r …
I cannot let you have it,
unless you hold it dear,
(as dear as ALL the world to you,  
 f o r e v e r , with YOURS near).
And… IF… you say you 'promise’,
my heart is YOURS to take,
but know...
you CANNOT give it back,
or EVER... let it ...B R E A K .







 


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 Reviews of "For him,a valentine poem .( my old work redone)"
Reviewed on February 16, 2005
Kay,

Very compassionate poetic write - beautiful my friend!!


Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 12, 2005
Passionately engaging all around. Love it. Great! Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Wonderful write!!!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Ohhhh Kay..this is such a magnificent write..indeed our hearts a re strong but at the same time so bloody fragile..don't ya reckon'
Thanks kiddo for this great write..loved it!!

vesna {{hugs}}

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Thank you for the re-post. This is great!

Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Excellent and expressive poem.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
OOoh fingers crossed aye!
Love is positively the most risky thing innit, still we do it.
Top poem and I'm glad you revamped it TY
Hugs Ch'erie

Reviewed on February 12, 2004
This is a great piece Kay, I really enjoyed your poetic approach. love and peace G

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
a valetine poem that honestly expresses your heart, i one i admire ...

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
I really enjoyed this poem - well done!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
I am not too good at Valentines day writes, but apparently by this example, Kay, you are the best I have read so far, thanks, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
lovely as is creative Kay.....
Thanks for being Kay...
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Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
Love this one Kay....I love to pull old ones out and rework
them....great poem..floria

Reviewed on February 12, 2004
This was so powerful and beautiful Kay, I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
Great write!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
Hi dearest Kay,
Such a lovely write...


Hope all has been well
with you dear lady!!!

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
Awwwwww..if only Kay!!

Just love your litle guyes at the bottom!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
AH i agree with Eileen.... This is so well done Kay!!!!
Beautiful....

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
ahh if only it could be that way dear Kay! Excellent poem,a powerfully written beauty!


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