HOT...ooh so HOT... by: Linda Law (poem) by Linda Law on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2009

This one had my mind in a different direction...until the end. LOL
I guess when we are old, our sensations and thoughts of things are perceived wrong.
You did a good job lighting up the guys here...then you threw a bucket of ice water of them! HAHAHA

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on September 27, 2008

that was great!!! loved the ending too
hugs
kathy

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on September 3, 2008

LOL, i loved that ending :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on September 1, 2008

Now how did I miss this hot little number? You had me smiling Linda.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Kool write Linda
I was expectiong .....
yes you said it
Something HOT
loved the twist at the end
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 30, 2008

The line between sexuality, sensuality, and hot steamy nights has always fascinated me. It can be 110 degrees but lovers will still connect.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Lucille Bellucci

Reviewed on August 30, 2008

Well, it is amusing at the least, Linda. Milk makes me think of sticky, though. And that I was. We had a day almost as bad yesterday. Only 88 but we have no A/C. I went outside three times to find Pinky and sponge her. Even hidden under layers of the fig tree her body was hot. Do you HAVE to live where it is 118?

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 29, 2008

Very Beautiful Photo Linda, erotic dances of ladies, or the souls of beautiful women dancing is what I see, reaching & swaying & embracing in the many temperatures of emotions :)

Yes It Surely Was A Hot One Today & Humid Here Too In Indiana...but yes I will admitt I did envision a euphoric explosion of sorts in your poem :) (I shall not be more specific-lol)
Much Love & Also Cool Breezes For You!!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 29, 2008

Just KEEP that heat out there as NJ has been having daytime temps in the 70's & 80s and nighttime down to in the 50's in some places...I think you need a cold shower as well, as after reading that I certainly do...;-) ed

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 29, 2008

Oh how I pray for fall and winter to makes its appearance to put an end to this relentless heat you have described so well...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 29, 2008

Wonderful write; well penned! But you made me sweat here; I need a cold chower! WHEE!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sweaty) Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :P LOL

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on August 29, 2008

Linda,I have to call the firefighters because this poem just sets a 4 alarm blaze around my heart :-).This is really beautiful Linda.I enjoy reading it and I am glad to read one of your poems again(I was on vacation).take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 29, 2008

OH, my, this one is steamy. WOW. Well done, Linda!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.