In the icy drear where Mars-winds blow there lay a zim in ice and snow-- A fabled conflusion of elements rare, formed long ago by a zim-za-nair--
The relic curves in sacred entreaty, with clappers and togs and strings wound tight-- it glimmers in drollops, as the ice retreats. Warm in the sun, it thums in the light--
The ghosts of Mars stir in revelrous reply, as riverbed fuzz ewchews surrender. The boro-wurms howl entreating moons light, scarfing on beetles and small furry slean;
Wow! From your mind springs a feast of creative offerings such as zim-za-nairs, boro-wurms and devolution ... and you use it all so convincingly! Great!
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I have always enjoyed your writing. Great piece, excellent title!
well done
Really Interesting write.
the whole scene well presented in your
great words....please write on.
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
sorry i haven't reviewed you lately, have only an hour on the computer, which is annoying, but that's the rules now. GRRRR!! hope you understand. i will review when i can!