I woke up early that morning
Several years from now
After a hard nights dreaming
Of people trying to keep me down.
It was a dream like no other
One which meant nothing to me
Of a strange and distant land
Where no one ever understands.
It was a soap impression of someone’s evil mind
A place where only hatred and poisoned
strawberries grew
And no kind thoughts existed, no love for me or you.
This miserable world was ruled by the
dreadful Mr. Knight
Who was always keeping an eye on things
Just to make sure everything was skin tight.
He was always sitting by a window
Watching the lightning and the rain
And would often appreciate the sun
showing up a few days late.
Everybody usually had a smile to hide
Even the androids with their unexpressive eyes
Persecuted inhabitants kept swallowing their pride
While assembled under man-made trees, overlooked
by cloudy skies.
Suddenly there appeared on a mountain
From an island in the sun
A Goddess who could bring back the love
that was gone.
One day the sun began to shine in this cloud covered land
And there before me who did come but the ocean-child
from the Isle of Cran
When I looked into her eyes, the more I could feel the love inside.
A voice rang out which said beware
For this woman will try to spread love everywhere
So Mr. Knight proclaimed that all people must stay
inside for if they didn’t, they would be taken for a
very unpleasant ride.
Corporation police cars soon arrived at my door
Several armed men had come to settle a score
“Don’t you know you can’t change the Institution,
it means Revolution.”
The Goddess from Cran appeared from the sky
Her eyes filled with tears
Now it’s time to say goodbye
Now it’s time to say goodbye.
As the Corporation Policemen dragged me to their car
They told me there would not be any remission
And for an encore, they all turned to the crowd and said,
“We’d like to thank you one and all for our first audition.”
‘1969’ RLS
A place where only hatred and poisoned
strawberries grew
And no kind thoughts existed, no love for me or you."
Your Mind Is Awe Inspiring With All These Perfect Little Details...yes just liike a dream would detail, and we to question...
Wonderful Poetic expression Lance, and totaly topping the cake with a wonderful layer of chocolate chips made of onyx coated stones is:
"A voice rang out which said beware
For this woman will try to spread love everywhere"
OH Fantastic! :)
Write On Poet!!
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Be always safe,
Karen
If you wrote this at age 12, your destiny was truly to be a writer.
Wasn't 1969 when everyone was high?? LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Karla's more claustrophobic than me--and it's all my fault! Ask her one time about it! LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Forever Love Tinky :)
This is the very first poem I wrote - way back in 1969! Enjoy!
Best regards and a Happy 2009!
RLS