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So I Lay Here
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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We all have had a crush...but aching for someone is more than a crush...your
heart cries your tears.


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Have you ever laid
In bed with an ache
I have...

I'm not talking about
A pain...
But an ache

The type of ache
That comes
With love

The wanting of someone
And not being able
To have that person

Because there are
Too many obstacles
In the way

So I lay here
With this ache
Which will never go away... ... ..


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 Reviews of "So I Lay Here"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 13, 2011
Yes.....I guess we've all been there a one point or another....fortunately for me...with the passage of time...the ache became nothing more than a twinge now and then....Nicely done!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 11, 2011
Eloquently expressed Deborah ~
My hope is for your happiness soon!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 11, 2011
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 10, 2011
So many of us have been there, sad but great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on June 10, 2011
A sad poem written very well; a poem that almost anyone can relate to.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2011
Yes I have that ache all the time...sighhhh...lovely Hugsss


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