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Mindful
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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She had met her
In a cafe
Paris, France
City of love...

Long, long ago
When things
Were appreciated
And women were s l o w

They left the cafe
Arm in arm-
Passed by
The ' Eiffel Tower '

She and I went to a hotel
That you paid by the hour
Clothing strewn all over...
That first kiss---mindful

 

 


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Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 10, 2012
Ah! The excitement of that first kiss....in a casual tryst! Nicely done, Deborah.

Anna

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 9, 2012
Evokes a full mind. Much going on here…

Ron

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on September 9, 2012
Being ever "Mindful" of
attraction..clever *Deborah*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed on September 9, 2012
The first kiss is always mindful
it stays with you when it has substance
I do wish our world was not so fast paced
that women and men were appreciated to those
earlier times and romance was at its height

Very good write Deborah

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2012
This I see full of appreciation. I treasure "Long, long ago/When things/Were appreciated" There exudes such experience from these words. Your vision is seen. ~~ Diana

Reviewed on September 8, 2012
Very nice.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 8, 2012
great rememberance
budd

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 8, 2012
Good write...
fee


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