I Love My Sister Carol (poem) by Carol Denise Mitchell on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2008

Carol, I am Carol and my real sister is named Sue! She was my protecter as a child, against other children. Luckily mom was beautiful and loving. It was the other children who were mean to me. This one grabbed my attention. Excellent tribute to a sister.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Frances Seymour

Reviewed on September 14, 2008

Wow! A truly emotional write. I commend you for this because I'm sure it was painful to recount these memories of your beloved sister.
Blessings...Frances

Reviewed by Glenda Bixler

Reviewed on September 6, 2008

Marcia?

Why not as prologue? Just curious...

By now, you know I get curious alot! LOL

Reviewed by Kathryn Perry

Reviewed on August 27, 2008

I am touched by your loving comments about your sister Carol. She was lucky to have such a wonderful "protector". This is very well written and full of emotion. Thank you for sharing it with us at AD
Blessings to you my friend
Kathy

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on August 27, 2008

Your poem shows the world what type of woman who have become due to all the pain that you have experienced.Take good care of yourself and keep on writing :-)

Edwin

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 25, 2008

A heartfelt powerful poem Carol! I can relate to this,as it brought
me to tears!
I use to bring a warm face cloth for my brothers welts/blisters on his back, from my dad and his physical abuse on him - as he sexually abused my sister and me...
Being there for the ones you love, maks what you ware going through not so hard, and loving from the heart is where it starts! The bonding process to begin!
Please! KEEP Writing, I love your style, your Upfront, in the face, the way I write - blunt! and tell it like it needs to be told - I am TRACKING your heart - What more can you share! To make us aware as your healing begins! with every word you pen!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful Sheexoo

STay Positive and WELCOME to this caring den!

Reviewed by Stuart McCallum

Reviewed on August 24, 2008

Carol,

This is indeed a most powerful, heartfelt write. You are a courageous lady with a kind soul.
Happiness always, Stuart (downunder)

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on August 24, 2008

This is so sad, Carol. I am sorry to hear about the pain you endured as a girl. Yet, you have risen from it and are using your days wisely. I commend you and pray God will continue to bless and to redeem the past by His grace.

Welcome to Authors' Den!
Connie