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What Went Wrong?
by kg cummings → (All Poetry by kg cummings)
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sometimes even the best of relationships go awry. Divorce is a terrible thing...


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They loved deeply with both of their hearts
A love so strong surely would never depart

Life, kids, and situations got in the way
Neither heard what the other had to say

Too many rumblings drowned love's song
Leaving all to wonder What Went Wrong?

Life cycles may return back to where love began
After traversing twists and turns in the master plan

Copyright © 2008 kgcummings from What Went Wrong?

 

 


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Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Thought provoking, indeed.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
There are never any guarentees in love or marraige. The old way of staying with someone no matter how bad it gets is no more, women don't have to stay and be abused, men don't have to put up with cheating wives etc etc. All we can do is take the best memories we have and walk away.
Fee

Reviewed on January 28, 2010
kg,

sometimes love just doesn't work out due to circumstances. You've described this pain very well.

Mary

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
VERY NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
I do know this sadness, pretty much daily.
It is like a ringing in the ears one must tune out, but it can be noticed.

John


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