What Am I? (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Your poetry flows like a river through the forest of owls gathering wisdom and light.

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

very well done

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

What a wonderful legacy to leave for your son. All sons should have such a legacy handed down to them. When they are told this, how could they not turn out to be good men. This is excellent. The picture and poem are beautiful.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

This is so meaningful and beautiful Rein......

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

"You are the light of my life,
A good and strong son,
Noble and true friend,
You are blessed and loved…

You are my son.”
Such verses are a witness to your mother's love for your son and they are beautiful in every way, Retta. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

I'm overwhelmed with the beauty of this poem...

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2004

Every word exudes such love, such deep emotion, Retta... I thought, of course, of my own son, who oftens asks me to recall little moments we have shared. It is always my pleasure to do that. Your poem is so personal, yet sings a universally beloved song for parents and their children. I found myself slowing down, wishing to absorb each thought and word. A beautiful piece, indeed. katy xox.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 27, 2004

You are a proud mother. That's who you are. Wonderful write indeed.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2004

One word---BEAUTIFUL.

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

this is excellent Retta, I think he hears you.
so many times they don't.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Moving and beautiful poem..

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Dear Retta,

Your sensitive soul is bared in this masterfully written poignant poem of love. You have such a beautiful gift. So easily you stir me and many others with your lovely words.
Chanti

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Absolutely stunning piece. Bravo.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Retta,

A stunning picture ... an excellent tribute ... wonderful!

Robert

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Retta, an absolutely well-penned emotive beautiful tribute to your son. Tremendous pride pours off the page in which I am sure he will appreciate it as he continues to grow. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

You are an eagle,
Wise and free,
Flying in the sky,
Forever free…

Gem of a write...I always read your write whenever I get a chance to do so....and u never let your loyal readers down...add me as your fan...write filled with raw emotions....cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

This sounds like a beautiful prayer for all the world's children from the depths of a mother's heart. It also sounds like the words that a loving Father God would that we ALL could hear, for that is how, I am sure, He sees us, too! Purity in thought and expression, Retta - just beautiful, and should be carved in stone somewhere for the world to see... TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Protecting, exploring, trusting, adoring.
There is so much pride to be in the right kind of name.
blessin's Reindeer,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

This is a lovely tribute to your son. This is beautiful without being overly sweet, a really good balance.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

oh so loving
beautiful
wise
maternal
just glorious!!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

You are Beautiful Caring Person Any Son Would Love To Have As Mother!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Dear Retta,

What an absolutely wonderful poem, filled with love and pride as only a mother knows. Stunning write and gorgeous picture, thank you. I wrote one just recently called "My Child" not written as eloquently as this. But I know the pride.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

(((reindeer)))

o, this is absolutely stunning--tears are rolling down my face--so beautiful--i could feel the mother's pride--just GORGEOUS--

thank you--a keeper

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

This touches the heart and soul in such a beautiful way. I could feel the mothers love her child and the pride of her people. Thank you for such a beautiful sharing!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

terrific write, reindeer; love it!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Retta, the sides of your den are bulging with pride!
A beautiful tribute for the Son you adore!

Lisa

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

10 10 10 10 10 10 10, all seven judges give this a ten.

Serenity and moonlight
HH

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Most excellent Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

AWESOME!!!! Just awe inspired words for your son. He must be proud of you. I am!!!!
Great inspiring write for others too.
Susan

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Wow. This is excellent.
Heartfelt write.
Lucky little man and lucky you.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Poetry for the ages! No doubt, one of your best. And, one that must surely be printed, framed, and presented to your son at the appropriate age. Tell us that you will... - Bill

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Tearfully lovely in tribute!
It made me remember my own son, of whom I felt the
same way, and who is no longer with me.
Thank you for this lovely poem and picture, Retta!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Simply beautiful, Reindeer. And now one of my favorites of yours.

Well Done!

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

I wish your son, all you wish him to be.

Reg.

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Thank you for sharing this one. It was so beautiful. As a mother, myself, I couldn't keep from shedding a tear. Keep up the good work.

M.Rose

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

a gem of love and understanding ...

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

What an Awesome support of
the World through Life! Am I saying that right?
I hope you understand.
Excellent poem.

I could use your "Magical" touch right now,
the second lesion cannot be operated on.Dr.'s say
a Good year left, I told him to go to H***! We will see what happens!
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

A beautiful celebration.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

What a glorious poem , a superb tribute to your son! Reindeer, you must save this for him to cherish when he is older. It will give him
much pleasure, it is a treasure!My eyes were wet as I read,such a loving poem!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

Reindeer, I'm just beaming reading this one. Wonderful poem. I don't have any real claim to Native American heritage, but have always identified with its spiritual wisdom and teachings and have shared a little of that with my boy. When he was six, his uncle dubbed him "little bright star" and it gave him such pride and joy.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

This is most beautiful one .. i loved this one and i am happy so happy to read this ... I loved this a lot ..

Thanks for sharing