The first stanza is so well written there is no need for the rest . . . Still, the others give credence to the first. Like Jane, I feel your poem gives of itself all it has to give, and that is a good thing. Awesome write!
Indeed, a noble sentiment to be sure, made surprisingly accessible here in this poem. Something elusive that becomes surprisingly real. As you say, "nothing is lost, where trust is our guide. Thanks for sharing this intimate thought. John
Our culture has taught us to believe in many ideas which aren't actually real. Exposing these illusions allows us to recover the power to live our lives according to our deepest desires.
Poetry. Various urgent, lively, and sometimes haunting poems appear here alongside stark black and white photos of Jones' homeless subjects. Jones takes on the plight of the homeless in different voices, echoing the thoughts of people on the streets,
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