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First Kiss
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Monday, October 10, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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First Kiss

Ah those youthful days
When life affords us the kindness
And the generosity
To run and jump and engage it
With exuberance;
When we are forgiven for
Our excesses—
Mostly.

Hormones are
A game changer;
It is when bodies take on
New urges
That cascade into
New adventures
And all things sexual
Dominate;
When all but the brave
Are unprepared
For this vibrantly fresh
Outlook.

Fantasies emerge
And find their way
Into every waking moment;
It is a time when a boy
Must have 20 encounters
Each day to satisfy these
Overtly masculine sensations.

But fantasies have a way
Of overtaking our spirits
And our sprints;
And they can no longer
Be quenched by
Sleep or cold showers.

And then you are alone
With your special friend
And she looks so innocent
And she smells so nice
And you are consumed
By her looks
And her guile.

She puts your hand in hers
And your heart races;
She smiles and your
Breathing chokes your face
With ungodly distortions;
She looks longingly
Into your eyes;
As your feet melt away.

She moistens her lips
And her eyes scan your
Mind and body like a
Laser beam;
She pouts and sighs
And she tells you she is ready
For you.

You lunge and you stumble
You look but cannot see;
You listen but all sounds
Are muffled;
And in desperation
You pucker up for action--
This is the moment
The one you have waited for
The one you would die for;

You follow your instincts
You cross the threshold
Between now and eternity
You feel an ecstatic rush;
Your mind and soul blend with hers
As your lips project outward
And sail across oceans of love—
And they land squarely on
Her nose.

  


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 Reviews of "First Kiss"
Reviewed by Deborah Shepard
Reviewed on October 28, 2016
beautiful the words flow the heart foillows

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 14, 2016
Even with your humorous ending, one can't negate the identity your piece brings up to any reader. In my experience, however, it's only when the kiss (and all that follows) is but a sidebar to the judging of innocence that lasts and guilt that we bury, bury, bury. For me, the top word/thought is "respect." Without it, there is no relationship.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 11, 2016
Your poem is so realistic I was wrapped up in the emotion even though my first kisses were less dramatic and orchestrated by my mother's initiation of kissing parties. And then, you landed it to earth squarely with that last line. Punctuating the inexperience of "firsts." I guess that's what my mother was preparing me for so that I wouldn't have that kind of boo-boo embarrassment when it got real.

Ron

Reviewed on October 10, 2016
Thank you for taking us through the stages that lead up to the great experience. Oh, yes................

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on October 10, 2016
Thank you for this lovely chuckle, and insight into what it's like for boys. Honestly, it isn't too different from a girl's experience, either!

Rebecca

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 10, 2016
So sensual and tender,
right up to the nose.
Be careful with that kiss,
and never say this blows.
Michael D.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 10, 2016
Ah yes, the awkward first kiss. Don't we all remember them. Nicely done. John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 10, 2016
"unprepared" . . . is the absolute right word for that first . . er . . . kiss and other things which go with that first kiss, my friend. I look back and cringe. I look back and am almost ecstatic remembering the first time a girl slipped her tongue inside my mouth. Everything happened to me at once and, again, that word . . . "unprepared" . . . comes into play. Eh, even so, somehow I managed to, gratefully, find my way about her. Yesssss!


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