REGIS...I ENJOYED THE Q, HOWEVER YOUR INTRODUCTION IS A TREASURE. WHAT A GREAT PERSON YOU ARE, BECAUSE IN THE END IT IS THE 'CHILDREN' THAT REALLY MATTER! LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
You have such adorably cute kids Regis. What a lovely photo and poem to go along with it. I've never actually experienced cherry blossom petals snowing down on me. I have a feeling it is an incredible experience. You made me smile with this poem. Thank you for sharing it.
I believe this would be considered a Classical Haiku as it refers to both nature and human nature, but I could certainly be wrong. In any event, I experienced this very "cherry blossom snow" this morning as it floated in a soft morning breeze on this beautiful April day. Lovely! ~Love and hugs, Elizabeth
Delightful spirits emanate from you and your children! (Let me know, Regis, when you have discovered how to reach beyond this "eartly stuff.") Joyful embrace....
You're right, it doesn't matter. It's still a rockin' ku, Regis, and your children were adorable at that age. I remember seeing their pics posted since they've grown. They're still good looking children. You must be one proud dad. ~~Nordette
Great ku, Regis! It goes by too fast, doesn't it? You miss their innocence, wonder and pure joy because it rubs off on you like pollen on a bee's behind. They're beautiful! Look like you...
Kute Ku for Kids of all ages! A delightful write to accompany your deightful family photo that is a picture of pure joie de vivre. Merci blossoms! Kate xx
What a delightful photograph - filled with ebullience. I could stare at the children's faces for hours. It reminds me what it is like to have such a passion for life.
Your haiku is a perfect foil for the incredible photo.
Thanks for sharing this.
Chanti
A most beautiful haiku--look! Snow in the Springtime! :) I'd love to see the cherry blossoms--
And the children are precious beyond measure!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2005
Gorgeous children, Regis! The thought of cherry blossoms "snowing" instantly rippled inside... you've mirrored spring and the life within it with the innocence of a child. This doesn't need one syllable more... just lovely! katy xox
I wish the tree & the kids could bloom forever...Ed
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2005
Beautiful and Sweet poem
Thanks Regxo
100% correct Kids matter!
You've got some great ones! They all take after their dad for sure.
Following right in his footsteps. XOOXXOOX
Tracey
Auff le Prof, you have a lovely family! And this is a very sweet Haiku. (I learned something from Eileen's description of a classic Haiku though...I didn't know that.) Hugs, Michelle
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children are beautiful! Be encouraged and
keep on writing Regis!
Much Love,
Margaret
Your children are beautiful.
nicole
Such happiness on their faces! You captured the innocence you speak of with this shot. Thank you for sharing this one:) Sheila
Janet
Absolutely wonderful
Peter
:)Sandy
Reindeer
William ......Peace & love
love and peace
Paul;-]
Micke
wonderful children you have ...
Peace,
Joseph
Your haiku is a perfect foil for the incredible photo.
Thanks for sharing this.
Chanti
deep-souled poet you
radiate moments of light
through this enchantment.
Thanks for sharing.
Aberjhani
A most beautiful haiku--look! Snow in the Springtime! :) I'd love to see the cherry blossoms--
And the children are precious beyond measure!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
~Carole
Love Tinka
A wonderfully heartfelt piece, Regis. Bravo. Nice pic, too!
Peace,
Carolyn
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
A haiku written for us
Thank you very much.
So, is this review my first haiku ever?
Super kids.
:)
John
Thanks Regxo
100% correct Kids matter!
You've got some great ones! They all take after their dad for sure.
Following right in his footsteps. XOOXXOOX
Tracey
Nice haiku
Peace and sunshine
These words are precious because as you've said ....they're
about the children and yes they are what matters!
Excellent Regis!
Best Regards',
Rich
B
thanks,
ann
Take care,
Sherry
You're right. All that matters is the children.
I'm smiling.
Love, Bonnie
TRASK
A great photo! I never knew you had children.
They are truly beautiful! Thanks for sharing with us!
(classic 5-7-5 haiku;-)
Love,
Eileen