This is not an ode to misery; merely a rhyming acrostic about a sad and ever lurking presence in this world/life...
Misery (Rhyming Acrostic)
Mean spirited and so bold Insensitive and so cold Seeking solace in the night Ever avoiding the light Residing deep in the gloom You are the princess of doom
Misery does come into all of our lives, go away Misery, I want only happiness in my life. I want to be a princess, but not of doom. Do you think i'll make it!
WOW I like the comment of Mr Bowmen - Run like hell from doom and gloom OH Well! This is not heaven yet - It takes all kinds on this earth.But Jesus wrote in the dirt -" Let the one who is without sin throw the first stone." However He said "I do not condemn you, go and sin no more" The key word here is REPENT He forgave the woman at the Well who had seven husbands but was married to none. So we must forgive; hard as it is to do. To forgive the abuser is the hardiest. But we must try. Be a little flower in God's Garden. It is not so hard to do.
Sounds like somebody got deeply hurt.
God bless,
Lew
Reviewed by Whitney Chamberlain (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2010
I think this poem is about someone. I for one have met many dark deceiver's who were not female but male. The Prince of Darkness who pretended to be pure white. This is very good.
I hope she rides her night into the morning's Light
As we all must do before we reach Wisdom's dephths.
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
Your writing is very much to the point of her essence, and it is well written. It may not be a good positive, but it surely represents the truth, about some people, that has to be known to others. This dark truth, I have had to face many times in my life, and I have had to write about it, too. Thanks for being the brave one and sharing this, Regis.
MISERY...THAT AGELESS KILLER OF CONTENTMENT AND PEACE...BUT THERE IS AN ANTIDOTE AND SHE WELL 'KNOWS' WHO HE IS. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.
What a powerful gift you have Regis!
There is deep meaning in each line.
Excellent! Thank you for sharing and
caring Regis...God bless and strengthen
you!
Regis, your verbalization chiseled like a sculptor the face of "Misery" that is easy to relate to. An imposing figure that we must all deal with many times throughout the course of our lives. A veiled, indiscriminate, bitch. I thoroughly enjoyed your acrostic my friend. May joy,love and peace forever make "Misery" an event obscured in the shadows of your life. Jon Michael
I am at odds with Lena below me here in some of the points she raises, so it's interesting how readers respond and react to what's offered so differently, Regis. I very much like this personification which puts a very real face on an otherwise abstract term and characterises it well. I find each line punchy and strong and absolutely crystal in its delivery. Neatly encompassed at the end, too. This works for me, but I am also very respectful of others' takes, so each to his/her own. This poem has certainly sparked and inspired many thoughts and directions: like misery itself. I think that, if the poem lacks emotion, then that is often true of the state of being miserable: a numbness occurs. Well done! :)) xx
This is a good poem, but it lacks emotion in my opinion and it is not a poem that leaves an impression in the end. When I read the poem the fourth line seems to ruin the flow, unless I am reading it the wrong way.
YES! I certainly agree. Misery is not only the princess of doom, though, but a spectral raven pecking at our souls crying "nevermore". I wish there was no misery, no wars, no weapons of destruction, no crime, no hate, no indifference, no bigotry. Let Misery lie in her realm and let us be happy and have gaeity in our lives. Thank you for sharing this macabre tale with an important message.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
Dear Regis,
How right you are about a sad and ever lurking presence in this world/life... How beautifully and eloquently expressed. Thanks a lot for many many things,
tarek
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2010
loved it ... you have a rare talent and the ways to express the truth in a very touching and yet straight fashion, Regis...you do it everytime...Brilliant piece...great rhyming acrostic. best wishes...neerja
Been there. Not a fun place. I'm back and ever so glad. Very astute of you. Hope your stay wasn't lengthy, but it's evident that you have visited. Thanks Dick
I am so glad that I don't live in that space. I would hate to be that person or to have that person in my world. Miserable people always want a companion but I try to stay far away from their trap. Good job with rhyming acrostic, Reg.
Take care,
Sherry
Well done Regis. You just described my old boss. She would cut folks to ribbions like a snake in the grass and take credit for all of your hard work. God knows how I even survived!
I sure have a lot to learn Regis, I didn't know what an 'acrostic' was till I read this one, very clever! I like the verse too, I have met a few people in my time that are the embodiment of misery, you describe them well.
Misery made me a little smarter...
Best wishes Regis,
David
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I am getting provoked by this poem. Thanks for reading!
Love ya! Becca
God bless,
Lew
Whitney
Peace,
Dayvid
As we all must do before we reach Wisdom's dephths.
may peace be upon you
TJ
hugs
Kathi
Love TinkaSweets
There is deep meaning in each line.
Excellent! Thank you for sharing and
caring Regis...God bless and strengthen
you!
Much Love,
Margaret
Lena
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
Sheila
ann
Carole~
How right you are about a sad and ever lurking presence in this world/life... How beautifully and eloquently expressed. Thanks a lot for many many things,
tarek
Blessings Reg,
Christine
TRASK...
Powerful write of anger and sadness.
Mary
Superb poetry Reg
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Metaphorically telling.
Ron
Cheers,
Dan
Take care,
Sherry
Luckily, though, I can NOT relate to her one bit!
Blessings,
Christine
nice work...
John
It is true- run like hell- don't look back.
Great job Regis.
John
George
Blessings,
John Michael Domino
cg
Be always safe,
Karen
Misery made me a little smarter...
Best wishes Regis,
David