When someone gets so much into your "soul," you get a bit crazy... I don't claim this to be a "poem..."
If Only
If only I could listen to the rain
with you
If I could feel the breeze
with you
If I could watch the leaves fall
with you
If I could observe the mighty river flow
with you
If I could listen to the mountain
with you
If I could smell the earth
with you If I could welcome winter
Beautiful photo, down by that river with your Love, If Only it could be after winter, if the heaven's opened and she came to you, an angel in disguise, but a real living one, you'd not be If only, you'd be With Only!
If Only - I love this poem. I never get tired reading about love. My wife and I have been married 44 years. I'm alreading panicking because one of us must go before the other.
I Love This Poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will read this to everyone over & over again! Beautiful!
Steph
Reviewed by Keaton Foster (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2010
With you, is always better than without you. Good non-poem. Nice flow and simple message, its clear to see that you are a more traditional poet. Much love KF
dear friend, your words are words any woman would love to hear, and even not hearing them to know they are there. thank you for sharing
love and hugs
mary etta
I am not a fan of you constantly repeating the phrases 'if I could' and 'with you'. I think they lessen the poem's appeal and I don't like how the poem sounds as I read it. It becomes tiring having to read these phrases over and over and the flow doesn't seem as smooth as a flowing stream. The phrases aside, the rest of the content is great though and makes me earn to experience these things with someone special.
It's a very good poem Regis, took me on a ride, with you poetically, cheers
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2010
awwwww...thatz simply soooo sweeeet...
its...If Only or think of Robert Herrick's....I dare not ask a kiss, I dare not ask a smile,Lest having that or this, I might turn proud the while.....
Warm and best wishes :)
I can imagine the lovestruck character in City of Angels reading this to Meg Ryan. So in love he is willing to give up his angel wings and become a flesh and blood mortal man.
Regis, it is funny you should phrase your intro with, "when someone gets so much into your soul, you get a bit crazy". It is so appropriate and yet I never really thought of it in exactly that way. For me as your poem so aptly describes. There is a need for me, a want for me to share every event in life, large or small with my wife. When I am alone and witness a beautiful panorama, a piece of artwork, flowers, whatever, I feel cheated that I was not able to share that very moment with my wife. As though the most important ingredient of the experience is missing. So I very easily relate to your words. Thank you for putting some of my emotions into words. May love peace and joy be with you my friend. Jon Michael
So reminds me of a beautiful song of The Beach Boys from about 1973: Only With You. The force of love behind this heart-searing cascade of "with you"s is the stuff of Niagara, Regis, and is deep calling to deep. It's silent roar is transcendent and thunders with longing. The only sign of "crazy" is you saying that you don't "claim this to be a poem"... but I know what you mean: it is far more importantly, the voice of your heart. As I've said elsewhere this evening, but equally here: I'm sure your "with you" echo will be returned to you by she who shares your soul. Moving and uplifting, thank you. xx
Lovely sentiments, Regis...perfect for a fall romance, even better for a winter coupling by the warmth of a fire sharing the coziness of a blanket...hearthside and goblets of wine If Only...be well...
Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
Without over-glamorizing, love, this poem brings forth the truth; and some may need it to be just the way you put it, Regis. I think we write, and definers define; this one is straight forward love, if defined by me.
if it looks like a poem ,smells like a poem taste like a poem,and lastly.............FEELS like a pome ....then it's a POEM...
nice work and I also want that someone,that you pen so well
It would appear that you picked the wrong person to invest your heart and soul in. I have always found it impossible to understand how someone can walk away from the one person who loves them so completely. Such a lament, Reg.
Take care,
Sherry
A lot of "if's" can only bring the reality of striving to overachieve our potinshal.A fantasy than reality
But then even a few would be better than not trying at all.
It's the love snd lust in us all.
If you're gonna be reching - might as well reach for the stars
Enjoyed Reg
God how I know this feeling. Man, I really get it! Love this piece Regis. You really encapsulate the yearning and desperation. Like wearing somebody on the inside of your soul, swimming in their veins. Beautiful.
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Gale Sinclair is a marriage counselor who has broken the cardinal rule of psychotherapy and fallen in love with his client, Zoelle Sutherland.
rege
Steph
Much Love,
Margaret
love and hugs
mary etta
Lena
The last line tears my apart. Losing a loved one isn't an easy things. Very beautiful.
Mary
Becca
its...If Only or think of Robert Herrick's....I dare not ask a kiss, I dare not ask a smile,Lest having that or this, I might turn proud the while.....
Warm and best wishes :)
It's coming from the heart, that's for sure!
Congratulations, Regis!
into love doing all this
or you both would share the deepest gifts
known to the love of friendship
Love Always
Dancing In The Rain...with you!
Vickie
hug
Kat
This is a lovely, poignant, poem which says it all. Thanks again for sharing your beautiful works.
Love n' stuff,
Micki
Daniel
Love TinkaSweets
Love,
Sage
Sheila
nice work and I also want that someone,that you pen so well
Just bought an original oil painting of a Corpus Christi sunrise very similar to your photo.
Ron
A poem filled with longing, Regis well done!
Carole~
I hope you can find this dream can come true.
Blessings,
Christine
Anna
Great Job!
Take care,
Sherry
Ciao,
Ragno Donna
God bless,
Lew
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Blessings,
Christine
But then even a few would be better than not trying at all.
It's the love snd lust in us all.
If you're gonna be reching - might as well reach for the stars
Enjoyed Reg
TRASK
Peace, love and blessings,
John Michael