A heart wrenching work.

hug
Kathy

The gnawing restlessness of this piece is evident throughout, yet balanced beautifully with reverence. Well done!

ABSENCE...MAKES THE HEART GROW SO MUCH FONDER...OBVIOUSLY. DURING THIS BEAUTIFUL TIME...LET WISDOM GUIDE YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS*INSPIRATIONS

You must have really been deeply in love with this woman...call her Regis!

Always,

Deborah

Regis,

A powerful, heartfelt poem. It touches the heart.

Love and blessings,
~Linda

powerful words to ponder ...

Beautiful.

The anguish of unrequited love -- excellently expressed. R

It is odd that the ones that feel it the most...are the ones who love the most. Excellent write.

Well penned moments of loneliness
Peace be with you

William

~Regis~
When souls are etched in time's presence. A beautiful
moment is flowing ever through the heart of hearts.

Lady Mary Ann

Very moving, every line of it
worths the time it takes to read!
Well done, Regis, blessings to you!

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Very moving.

Michael D.

Time Doesn't heal the wound, just lessens the pain. Love is seldom equally reciprocated. I feel your pain. Your poem is deeply brilliant.

Another well written poem, as usual. However, let's hope the woman in question doesn't read it because all you'll get is her pity. Women never love men they feel sorry for.
All the best & Merry Christmas!

...just when you wake up and remember the half-face...is
the loneliest feeling in the world...a restless longing for the one
you deeply cared about...is the feeling that hurts most...and
continue to persist long after the relationship ended...but
in such moment you trully connect to your spiritual essence
and learn...all left is only the wait for the pain to go...to be
replaced by an inner peace...
The words of your pensive poem, Regis, help to put a lost love
into perspective...and healing to occur...
Thank you for sharing your sensitive and fine writing.

I'm with the rest. Having spent some time in depression over lost loves for one reason or another, the best thing to do is get out in the marketplace and check all the fish in the sea. Before you know it, the love of your life, she will be.

With age, it always seems to get better.

Ron

I'm with the rest. Having spent some time in depression over lost loves for one reason or another, the best thing to do is get out in the marketplace and check all the fish in the sea. Before you know it, the love of your life, she will be.

With age, it always seems to get better.

Ron

Moving poetry, Regis ... The holidays can be difficult ... I wish you peace and joy in your heart, my friend ...

Beautiful! She is one lucky lady!!!!
Love ya! Becca

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TRASK...

I hope and do I hope that this "Lady" will not toil too much in her wonderment. She's going to be wondering someday, 'Now, why am I alone? Damn!'.................That's when you, my handsome poet, tell her why.

Love ya!

Jane

Nicely said Regis!

Sorry you had to get hurt like that. it happens and isn't nice at all, cause we get so used to that person, it's like we want them to be with us forever. But forever isn't just meant to be.

Oh my. Have you drifted apart? Has a wall come up? Is the bridge missing a few key boards?

I have been in this place before; believing that the love you once shared was so right, so powerful that it could never end. Unfortunately, people have their own issues and in the end, they don't feel the same way that you do. Somehow, you must find a way to move on and let them go. The problem with the love the two of you shared is not yours, it is theirs and they will never hold that love in the special place that you do.

Ahhh . . . You have bigger cajones than to allow this to go on for too much longer. Use them.

Beautifully expressed Regis. Man, you got a way with words! If she reads this one she should heed your call. If not, she may not be worth having after all. Hey, I want you to have a MERRY Christmas so go for it my friend.

I wish you peace, love and new found happiness. Amen!

Sorry for the ache in your heart Regis. Wishing you many blessings.

All too true, Reg, all too true, but I think you have GOT to get past this...let it go, ride that bike and fight it out of urself...-e-