I love plants and birds and rocks and things! Yes, then reality appears and that special someone........my, my!! Your imagery blended in with the lyrics you used makes for a perfect setting no matter what!
WHAT WE NEED ALWAYS SEEMS TO SHOW UP AT PRECISELY THE RIGHT TIME...AND THIS IS ESPECIALLY APPRECIATED WHEN ONE IS WANDERING AIMLESS IN A DESERT THEN WATER COMES... EVIDENCING PLANTS, BIRDS, ROCKS AND ALL SUCH THINGS THAT WERE HIDDEN BY THE DESERT. FOR SURE...THE HORSE AND ITS RIDER, WILL NEVER FORGET SUCH AN EXPERIENCE...WITH AMERICA. MANY THINGS 'LIFT' US-- SOMETIMES ITS A THOUGHT OR A PHRASE, SOMETIMES AN AROMA, SOMETIMES...A PERSON WITH A SONG. I WENT AND LISTENED TO THE SONG(YOU KNOW I DID) AND I REMEMBERED IT AS A HIT SONG I LIKED. SO WELL DONE, REGIS, THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The stark comparison of HER with everything else, and how thoughts of her loom larger than the rest make this an excellent writing! The question you pose at the end says it all!
No matter what we experiencing in life, whether it's love, on a vacation, at work or even grocery shopping....We remember that one song that stands out the most....Music soothes everyone's soul....
I love that juxtaposition of words in that great lyric by America, too. So, thinking about the lyrics always brings you back to the "you" you are referring to. Will she read the poem?
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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Love ya!
Jane
Great writing, Regis!
Connie
Love and Dreams,
Karen
Ron