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IS IT GOD'S FAULT
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   I love her very much.
   But she... 


   What should I do?
   I have no idea.
 
   My heart beats for her.
   But hers...


   I know it is neither mine
   Nor hers fault.


   Then is it god’s fault?


 


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 Reviews of "IS IT GOD'S FAULT"
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
it is the fault of time my friend. Your aches is felt in this write.

Susan

Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Never give up.
Where there's God
there's hope.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Sometimes love is not meant to be sexual in nature.

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
David,
You can't make someone "love you" no matter how you feel, it comes from within both hearts. Never give up a love for you is out there. Take care.

Nancy

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
((( David )))
No, it isn't Gods fault.
Never give up hope, when
thats all you have.
Excellent heartfelt write.

~~Linda~~

Reviewed on August 4, 2003
So heart-wrenching, so very moving, excellently written,

Reindeer


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