Your words come through just fine, Steven! I highly doubt that you are "demented". Seems to me that you are geared up for spring!!! Write on, my friend!!
From what I've read of your poetry, I see no dementia. Maybe a little mental abnormality but sometimes you write very insightful poetry with no sign of dementia.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Love ya!
Jane
Ron