"Will you bow down love?"
"Hear my scripted srimmage of snide" Rhetorical quest ?
Yes, I'll dance
Break caps on the floor
Love this style
Been here once a twice before
Fluorescent moon
Facial eclipse
You should see you from this view
A few misplaced hair's on head
Peach fuzz forest ears
So red those California mountain sides burn
I dub you daughter deity this evening
Heard every calculated word of breathing
No, don't break character Beth This act ain't Fin yet
Place a privy palm on my head
Bless this scamp
That piece of inner thigh
You won't need it
Ah.....now eye to eye
Throw some dung hay here with me
Shaved smooth, degree holdin' ape
Fun...eh
Crude slick ladder
Slide down to your boy
Strike a match
We'll set this barn a blaze
Oh...That broodmare she can come too
We'll ride bareback to your silverspoon......
Will,
I caught the great use of language in the first half of this poem but not the import of your words quite; the second half I found much more meaningful and worthwhile...and the final lines striking, literally and metaphorically.
John
Expressive life of teenage years, perhaps from today, but it could also be applied to years past. Never easy growing up in this world, trying to find a niche. A piece well written....
Jason Donovan has a secret.
The Clere's Restaurant's drama has been unfolding in front of his eyes. If he can see it, so can the restaurant's other guests. But there's something the servers aren't telling him, and he will get to the bottom o
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I caught the great use of language in the first half of this poem but not the import of your words quite; the second half I found much more meaningful and worthwhile...and the final lines striking, literally and metaphorically.
John
Be always safe,
Karen