people (poem) by olyvia e hudson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 30, 2009

Sadly, you share a too common theme in this world/life, Olyvia. I appreciate the honesty with which you express your verses. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

So sad for someone so young to feel such pain but you've written about it very well. Remember that you're your own best friend; don't let other people pull you down.

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

One can feel the pain and loneliness in this, Olyvia. One day will come a new revelation.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

So honest and real...you express your emotions so well.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

Words of love come easy to many and spoken to easily for most. Feeling love comes from within yourselve as much as radiating from those around you. Feelings of sadness, hurt and being alone can be felt inside even when I am surrounded by people who most likely do love me in their own way yet there is something inside of me that doesn't perticularly love myself that day. Your words do inspire a lot of thought for me. LadyJ

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

Young love can really floor you at times but it soon passes when another gal gets your interest. Great poem right from the heart full of those blues a lad gets when the love of his life is less than he thought.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

I do not know your age but assume you are a teen. You bring back what it feels like to be young again and all the pain that can accompany it. Adults as we get older tend to forget what it was like to be young sometimes when it comes to hurting and it sounds like you have had your share. Your writing though shows an expression of rising above the past and making the future yours. Looking forward to reading you in the future here with your new Den Family.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

Gear young poet, many of ours has been there, felt that and let despair to come into our lives as a welcomed companion because we didn't knew better, because the world around didn't said that it will be better some day. Then, few of us start to write, to say in paper what the world didn't want us to say aloud, and we, for the first tie didn't felt "dead inside...and that's the truth!"
An extraordinary poem.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

Olivia, you rock! and so does this poem which is very real!