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it was hard to put this poem into words to understand but after a while it became easy.

god

when can I pray?

when can I sleep?

when can I cry?

when can I stand on my feet?

when can I laugh?

when can I smile?

when can I stay awhile?

when will I die?

when will I love?

when will I see you?

in heaven above,

when can I meet you?

when will you smile?

I’m sorry,

I cant see you for a wile,

but ill keep you in me all the while.
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 Reviews of "god"
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
Reviewed on January 21, 2010
Nicely done, Olyvia. I think he did smile at that one.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Olyvia, this is written so simply, so beautifully.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 4, 2010
a very sincere and touching write
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 4, 2010
although religion and faith are an individual pursuit I think you captured the way the majority of us feel about it...well done Olyvia.
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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 4, 2010
Touching in humantity expressed Olyvia. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
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