A lovely literary lament, Robin. I see your use of mostly hard consonants, softened by dreamier soft syllables, as a delicate hand. And, in the ending line, hardness, without hope.
Wounded veteran and battered woman face more trials together!
After an RPG attack on their barracks in Afghanistan, corpsman, Wade Scott wakes up in an Army hospital in Germany with his right arm gone. His other friends were wounded too. Luk
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Susan
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
"Sunset of a Dream" flows leaving a sad-wise foam on the waves of the sea of hope.
~ I would think that they become humus to nourish the tree of dreams.
I salute You, Poet.
In gratitude and in admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU