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Copper Mountain's River

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, May 28, 2003

Late morning sun slants over the canyon’s deserted walls,
strafing through Cottonwood's towering heights,
and, onto, the San Francisco River’s shallowed waters;
diamonds and starbursts jitter and dance.
Behind Copper Mountain’s buffering cliffed fortress
the intensive mining of man’s metal-need continues.
An aura of drowsiness shimmers in the air, here,
as cicadas timelessly hum and drone.

Standing on the edge of the threading bank,
the decision is made to travel upriver,
adventuring into history’s roiling silence,
echoing with sharp bird calls, lizard scuttlings
and splashing footstep’s passage back in time.

Raggedy barbwire slants with the weight
of scabrous fence posts, weaseling through tarbrush,
and disappearing up the cacti slope.
Undercarriage of miniature ore car reposes,
rustily weeping its memories into the present.
Above, two mine adits gibber soundlessly,
their weakened walls supporting spider’s webs,
shakily upholding the formation of Man-made Time.

The river forks, rushes with trilling laughter
out into the open, on the right, but to the left,
visions of feathery pink-tipped Tamarisks beckon
as they curtsy to the whispers of river life with
lush curves of shallow water, minnows darting,
caterpillars treading tiny rafts of floating plants, and
water bugs rowing their bloated bodies, living
as they did a hundred years ago,in this niche.

A 1930’s icebox door sprawls its straight lines garishly.
As a fin-backed relic auto, twisted and warped,
is securely impaled by a mesquite’s thick branch.
Nearby, a wood-floored panel truck of ancient design,
intentionally placed and crushed by large boulders-
an Old-Timer’s solution to bank erosion from monsoon floods-
is now incongruously absorbed into the river’s restructured line.

Receding back to the future, the flare of deserts daytime heat
dispels the mirage of prospecting the past, the edges of Life
have blurred beyond memory, the river flows, the cliffs are silent,
as cicadas timelessly hum and drone.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/28/03
Copyright 2003 © 


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Reviewed on April 24, 2013
Hail Poet Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen!

I hope to live up to the day when the literati will bow to Your golden pen, and pay You the due accolades.

Much gratitude to You for keeping the Lamp of Poetry on, and for this exquisite Scroll, "Copper Mountain's River".

May You enjoy a long healthy life through a creative blissful living!

In respect and admiration.

Your proud reader,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 29, 2003
well developed imagery...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 29, 2003
Wow!! This is outstanding!!

Reviewed on May 29, 2003
Erin, this is a fabulous write...makes me want to visit it myself. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2003
"...an aura of drowsiness shimmers..."
"...as they curtsy to the whispers of river life..."
"...water bugs rowing their bloated bodies..."
"...securely impaled by a mesquite's thick branch...
"...the mirage of prospecting the past, the edges of Life have blurred beyond memory..."

My god, Erin, my god! In typing back some of this brilliance, I was engulfed, again, with the feeling of this piece.. to type it all back to you would tell you what I liked best here. I'm astounded by how completely I am able to experience your words when reading.. to the word.. to the letter.. I am captivated by where you take me and how eagerly I go into what you write. There is truly a physical 'returning' to life outside your visions. You, madam, are one helluva writer! Jaysus! katy

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2003
Really really excellent Erin. Bill

Reviewed by Lee Ennis
Reviewed on May 29, 2003
Wow, Erin, this is wonderful…Poetically, you are growing by leaps and bounds!!!

Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Absolutely Outstanding, I loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Awesome write!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Theres Gold in dem dare hills and it looks just like these verses
A trully golden write

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Hi Erin,
Outstanding write...
Beautiful...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Exceptional writing Erin..such superb imagery.
Chrissie

Reviewed on May 28, 2003
This is outstanding, Erin! The last verse sums it up! Thank you for sharing.
-Bear

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Erin, the imagery was perfect. Loved it.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Beautiful, Erin. You took me right there. There is something about the desert that calls to those who love the wilds and nature. I wish everyone could experience it this way.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2003
Hi Erin, I see you have been there. This beautiful write captures the history of our great state.


tony


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