I sit by bedpost,
See small flat-bottomed boat.
Dream movie star blue skies.
Water, a deep liquid green,
Luke warm to the touch.
Lines cast,
This little pirogue floats purposefully.
Polled across the sun-stroked surface,
Then let loose to drift,
To spin in lazy circles.
Egrets and herons swim overhead.
An upstart breeze shifts impatiently.
The dragonfly darts back and forth,
Invisible thread in tiny hands,
Attempting to sew another seam.
And the clouds above
Parade. And I,
I drift across this rippling waterway.
Feel the pull of current
As this pleasant vision carries me,
Along with pole and tackle,
Back to days gone by
And a dozen other outdoor revelries.
Transports the fisherman
To the lake’s distant hidden edge
And an overhang of gangly trees.
And the shade,
The shade,
From that, oh so slowly setting sun,
A most welcome reprieve.
Line cast,
Bobber dips and a quick tug,
Snagging another mid-summer memory.
The rhythm of this piece is such that the reader feels as if floating atop a gently rocking boat, where humid air, occasional cheeky mosquitoes make attempts and, for this reader, an irresistible glance to the bow and that cooler you've not yet popped upon and offered a brewski. Well? Ready?
Much more relaxing than my story of the same name. Oh the memories conjured up with this one. Bank fishing was more productive with less sunburn, but there's nothing like fishing in a floating boat on a serene day. It seems okay if you don't catch anything.
But I would sure like to see those herons and egrets "swimming overhead." Perhaps they were just appearing to be swimming (flying) in your daydreaming of the poem.
The fifth and final book of the Jade Owl Legacy sees a full battle for life as we know it. The world is threatened by the denizens of the Jade Village leading the China Hans through a fantastical world and to a conclusive battle.
But I would sure like to see those herons and egrets "swimming overhead." Perhaps they were just appearing to be swimming (flying) in your daydreaming of the poem.
Ron
where you left a row half done...
Nicely done.