I walked into the bar and said kay tall you all
kay tall you all kay tall
the girls all said back howdy
one said are you free?
I said I am tonight
And I can treat you right
and I ain’t gonna lie
I'm not such a bad guy
but I ain’t no saint
I can’t be what I ain’t
I got love at heart
that’s the place to start
que tall you all que tall
humpty dumpty falls
and all your good intentions
can't put him back together again
we danced until last call
she left me on the wall
all the king's horses
and all the kingsmen
counted backwards from number ten
I guess I had to fall
que tall you all que tall
I guess I had to crawl
to get on out of there
que tall you all que tall
humpty dumpty always falls
and all your good intentions
can't put him back together again
Like, Que Será, Será, your lyrics use French (I believe) in an unnatural setting like a country bar to get the effect you want and a catchy phrase as the hook.
Well done.
Ron
for this interesting piece
and most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
William