Droplets of Breath (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 16, 2014

Love is all! Your verses express passion perfectly shared by two. Thank you, Carol. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on July 4, 2012

Exquisite!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2012

This is just wonderful Lily and gives me a picture of Gone With the Wind, my husband and I loved that movie. We held hands and necked in the movie theater I will never forget it. He was my Clark Gable, and I was his Scarlett giggle. I miss him, but what a wonderful movie I see in this

Edith

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

Lily, Love is all it can be...all we want it to be!

Deborah

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

"Lasting forever as much as that seems" - very wise. Great fullness in this poem. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

Lilly you have a remarkable way of writing. You are a very gifted writer putting into words the tenderness of romance and love. Everything you write is just beautiful and felt so deeply. I often read what you write to my girlfriend (who loves your poems too) but recite it to her with the deepest of love from me to her. You know what love is, what true love is. KEEP WRITING!

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

It starts already with the quote, an excellent prelude for this beautiful fugue about two lovers.
Two souls who melt together in oneness, so pure and so romantic.
To reach it's full depth with the last sentence
"Something that you and I only behold"

Really fantastic Carolee

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

Having experienced it, there's nothing so intimate as when two exchange whispered words so close that their breaths mingle. Just a shame that so many allow tooth decay and bad eating habits to ruin the experience and lose the intimacy you have so elegantly described.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

Your passion is apparent here, Carol, and the style you write your poems in is exquisite. Old school and very, very romantic. Don't stop. I know you won't. To be as close to one another as this poem touches on is to completely and totally be in love, and it only works if both can inhale the others undivided love and affection. That is love. Pure love.

Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

All I can say Lily is this takes my breath away, just like the song of two lovers. Very beautiful

Gail

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

Lily,
What a vision of two so perfectly entwined souls.
Budd