Not only your beautiful rhyming, but your message in this poem is so understandable, lovely and direct that I find myself in awe of what you have written.
The true story of Cheryl Pierson Cuccio who made headlines in 1986 and her husband Rob Cuccio. Cheryl was abused sexually and physically and Rob died for 43 minutes on Cheryl's 43rd birthday.
Diana...
Ron
Love is what is Heaven
Not some place, or some reward
Not winning at the game of life
Not bowing to the Lord.
I feel that if we don't bow to the Lord our life will be wasted and if we do bow to him, every part of our life will be significant.