There is a touch that I feel within my whispering dreams and beneath surface, that is as real as the tangible expression of fingertips upon skin. There is a vision I behold that my eyes do not reflect and my mind cannot conceive that is played out upon hidden receptors. A finely tuned visual melody that is the holographic soul-rendering of 'you and me'
...And I know without doubt and beyond all reason that although it is beyond my capacity to understand It is wholly within my power to take the road that will lead me to you.
Go THERE! Feels WELCOMING! Simply BEAUTIFUL Chanti, and expressively loving profound poem!
Love this poem!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive! Love the haziness in the pict. of you as well....
Oh Chanti, you have written another masterpiece, full of love, romance, and emotion. The soft wording is like it is from a dream. But all roads lead to Him that touches our hearts and souls, with love and kindness. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whoom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
In the realm of unscripted dreams, our heightened, unhindered senses are often more in touch with our emotional and spiritual needs and desires than the all too often brute touch of real life experience.
Hi Chanti,
I haven't been to your Den in ages and I'm sorry. This is a very inspiring and personal poem that touched my heart, greatly, right now. I appreciate the reminder that we're always able to take the road that leads us to our Creator.
Not only was this hopeful and beautiful, but I took a 'dual urge' from it. On the one hand, I felt your words were intended for a distant, perhaps yet unknown, soulmate. And on the other, I could feel the same search for the 'spirit self'; the awakening of mind to our true soul and the dichotomy of human existence. In either case, the melody is arousing. Excellent, as always.
Holographic soul-rendering of 'you and me'...wow. This is packed with fantastic imagery...not that I expect anything less from my good friend Chanti. Stirring, and powerful piece. Love and hugs, Michelle
Beautiful, beautiful write - is the journey worth it? One way to find out - one foot in front of the other. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
This is beautiful.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
Ab-so-lutely! The road may be treacherous, but it is worth the aches and trauma to make it to the end where beauty and grace await you in the presence of a rock-hard lover who will forever be yours and forever be true and adoring . . .
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Sheila
Love this poem!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive! Love the haziness in the pict. of you as well....
Sam
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whoom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Cryssa
Your Poetic Express Is Lovely!!
Your Eloquent Words Are Very Loving...
Do You Have This One In One Of Your Poetic Video's?
Embraced~Embrasse'
Vickie
Ethereal work, Chanti
Regards
Daibhidh
Blessings,
Joyce B.
I haven't been to your Den in ages and I'm sorry. This is a very inspiring and personal poem that touched my heart, greatly, right now. I appreciate the reminder that we're always able to take the road that leads us to our Creator.
Thank you,
Jill
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Christine
that is the holographic soul-rendering
of 'you and me'
This poem expresses lovely and deeply felt sentiments. Thank you for your thoughts, Chanti. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis
Beautiful, beautiful write - is the journey worth it? One way to find out - one foot in front of the other. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
very well penned...
John
I miss you, my friend.
Tami
Ron