Peace prevails as I read your poem about Jesus. Even the first verse by itself tells a wonderful story about how He influences you.
I like the way you use rhyme. (I don't know the names of various styles; just know what I like).
This is one I could read over and over.
SURGICALLY RE-WRITTEN and CONDENSED Feb-May 2013... A MONUMENTAL JOURNEY is an adventure mystery historical fiction novel that follows a young mans journey (with friends) to find Truth, happiness, purpose, and a long lost Norse tribe.
It is five years since Delta Force stopped a deadly missile attack in the Middle East. Now team leader Jason Patrick is living a quieter life in North Carolina with his family, stationed at Fort Bragg.
But that is about to change when a new,
I like the way you use rhyme. (I don't know the names of various styles; just know what I like).
This is one I could read over and over.
Connie