Always turned on Was his light-bulb of encouragement For her to plug into Whenever sadness darkened her mind Yet never did she light up Any thank-you smiles To illuminate her gratitude
Swifter than a chameleon Falling in love with new colors His moods he altered To always be in agreement With her state of mind Yet the look of satisfaction Never graced her face
At 0100 hours With rope in hand He crept without trepidation Across the graveyards Of her failed relationships And lassoed her lost heart And brought it back to her Yet dances of joy Her feet did not do
Ooooops!!!!! Hope you have made up with her already! Your poetry are so lively. You write about people in real life in the best of way. Well-done indeed!
How sad when a "woman" does not know how to behave like a "lady", unfortunately their attitudes spoil circumstances. Another of your sage writes, and so beautifully penned.
Just found this quote and thought it appropriate:
She obviously thinks she is the only real thing!!!
Love
Love is the difficult realization
that something other than oneself is real.
Iris Murdoch (1919–1999),
Irish-born British novelist.
warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2005
Perfectly written and so beautifully said. I have to say I agree with you there are many women (and men) out there but more women exactly as you wrote here. Perfection!
Thanks.
Lady T
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2005
When you touch into the darker emotions you do it extremely well as this write shows.
Very dark. I agree with Eileen tho. Men, I have known to be very ungrateful, even when you do things nice for them. It seems to me ron, that you have had a lot trouble with women, because most of your poems are dark and sultry. I guarantee tho, when everything is completed in my travels to my final goal, I would not be an ungrateful womn (I'm not ungrateful now), but this poem has taught me to be gracious in accepting the things that are done for me, in kindness as well as in changing an attitude to please. Thnx ron for sharing. may the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
I like the way Chanti expressed her take on your poem, Ron. Thank you for sharing. Fortunately, I have not met too many women like what you describe in this poem. Love and peace to you. Regis
I remember a male friend once telling me that the reason why men no longer treat women with chivalry is that women no longer behave like ladies. If a man is a gentleman and opens doors for a woman, they are rarely thanked for their efforts. Knowing this, when a man opens a door for me I always thank him and I do appreciate all his efforts to treat me with respect. It is such a pity there are women in this world who do not know how to be gracious. Great poem Handsum
Chanti
PS: It is clear from my statements that I am not a member of the bra burning brigade. I enjoy being a member of the weaker sex and revel in my femininity. I love a man who behaves like a man.
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How sad when a "woman" does not know how to behave like a "lady", unfortunately their attitudes spoil circumstances. Another of your sage writes, and so beautifully penned.
Just found this quote and thought it appropriate:
She obviously thinks she is the only real thing!!!
Love
Love is the difficult realization
that something other than oneself is real.
Iris Murdoch (1919–1999),
Irish-born British novelist.
warm hugs
Elga
Thanks.
Lady T
Happy St Patrick's Day!
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
sounds like so many spoiled brats out there
(men) too but i got you.....
enjoyed this too to real sad case
let her sit alone for awhile maybe she'll sing another tune
like the art :)
Thank you Handsum You for reminding me to be grateful!!
I AM SO GRATEFUL FOR READING YOU HANDSUM YOU!!
Love Tink ~ A ~ Tinka
Chanti
PS: It is clear from my statements that I am not a member of the bra burning brigade. I enjoy being a member of the weaker sex and revel in my femininity. I love a man who behaves like a man.
Paul;-]
in the world today...both women AND men.
Nice piece of writing, Ronne.