"Bright Red" reminds us of human nature's: "Hope springs eternal."

"and, I, alive, now, and dancing, want to live within your eyes forever."

Love defies the notion of unobtainable immortality!

Richard

Wonderful imagery and startling contrasts / progressions of colors and moods. Well done.

I really enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your writes.
Rose

I love the way your poem starts with "melancholic moods" and progresses toward a happier mood. Nicely done, and looks great in that frame.

L o v e. i t. And you made it look so nice!
S m a s h i n g!! 'Pea' <3

I liked this poem very much. I found the imagery to be stunning, and the prose, most meaningful. You have a very nice poetic voice.

Tami, Lovely poem, thought provoking and with such vivid imagery.

I like the format of this poem Tami. The wallpaper is very pretty. To live in his eyes forever is so romantic Tami. Thank you for sharing.

Merry Christmas Tami, to you and your family and loved ones, and a very Happy New Year too.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

lovely...absolutely love...classical romance with a subtle hint of sensuality...very well done my friend.

YOu so inspire dear Sweet Tami! Thank you for sharing this Beauty! WArm HuGs, Sheeeoxxo

He's a lucky man! Great poem, Kiddo.

Tami, this is exquisite.

Elizabeth

And so it is ... the light springs forth from the darkness.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Tami, your gift of words inspire us.

Cliff

Precious friend,
Red is the colour of passion and you're certainly not lacking that but in this write I am reminded of a movie that was shot in black and white except for a young girl in a scarlet coat. The contrast of this little girl's coat was what made the bleak horror of the movie that much more effective. In this I feel like I'm seeing your life blood in print. You have an incredible heart, so filled with love and I pray that all you desire comes to you in abundance.
Love Chanti

Excellent write where the colors of fall merge with the depth of love.

this is truly a beautiful poem, Tami ...

Lovely sentiments beautifully expressed, Tami. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,

Regis

ohhh this is so smooth and rich, Tami. Beautiful!
Take care,
Sherry

Flows with the crimson warmth of deep yearning and the brilliant flames of quietly vibrant passion. Absorbing work.
Aberjhani

Very nice, Tami -- I especially love the last verse, "and, I
alive, now, and dancing
want to live
within your eyes forever."
Lovely!
My warmest regards,
CJ

Must keep the mind active.
Well if it's meant to be, it's going to be..