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Letting Go
by Crystal-Rain Love → (All Poetry by Crystal-Rain Love)
  
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Another from my early days......



Good night sweet love
I lay you down to rest as I wander on
No longer believing in fairy tales
I know you won’t return home to me on a majestic white steed
You rode off into the sunset
and now I must crawl out of this abyss and find my own way to the light
Too many days of thunder and nights of cold rain have washed hope away
Nothing is left but will
for you left with my heart in your hand
The emptiness in my soul has been replaced with determination
I will survive this tragedy
The rain may beat down on me
and the thunder may echo through my body
But I will persevere
as I take from your hand what is rightfully mine...
And kiss you softly goodbye.

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 Reviews of "Letting Go"
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on December 25, 2003
Softly, passionately written. A sad, longing good-bye. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2003
I don't have alot of fancy words to add to this review. What I write comes from my heart. I saw the title and went right for it. This one hit home. Very nice heart felt write. I will save this, I need to read the last line a few more times. Again very nice. peace abel

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 28, 2003
finely written...sad and well done

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 25, 2003
well done

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
There is pain expressed here but there is also hope and the strength that grows therefrom. Thank you for this offering, Crystal-Rain. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
like the balance of loss and finding,written as tenderly as that last kiss..beautiful

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
So bittersweet and just beautiful. Can feel the pain and the hopefullness together. Enjoyed this much Crystal.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Very inspired write showing determination and passion

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
I love the strength you showed in this after the hardship. Great write!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
OUCH OUCHJ OUCH! Wonderful talent. This one pulls at heart strings. Beautiful heart you have...Fine work!

Thank You,
Emilie

Reviewed on November 23, 2003
This was so moving, beautifully written, I felt this one so deeply tonight,

Reindeer

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Excellent piece, very well felt. The emotion in this is indeed electric.
Allen

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Professionally reflects both the pain and determination to rise above to overcome emotional wounds. Very well written, Crystal. If, as Jerry mentions, this is early work, then you are headed towards mastery and recognition. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Tonya I
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
That is so painful to read, you really portrayed your pain through this, hope it is just a poem. Beautiful. Tonya x

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Tragic but with optimism throughout. If this is your early stuff it is quite good. Check your message board.


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