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Phaedra
by Walter LaVerne Jones → (All Poetry by Walter LaVerne Jones)
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Romance or love or wonder at both


Troubles I know you well as the wind blows hot from hell


sleep and comfort I know you not


for into truth of living death is all I got


rust in iron upon an anvil built


sword of suffer I have up to the hilt


random freedom came once upon a time


her name was Phaedra I claimed her for mine


wrinkle in the wine glass cherry on the vine


softer than heaven this love was to be mine


met her in the fields of a day so long ago


met in the valley just after the first snow


held to my heart she pierced my soul


when we had to part


over time mortal into swells we go


from love to hate and troubles I know


and troubles I know



straight as the crow goes in heaven rows to a place of fate
gate grows on amber fields of snow
Phaedra calls to blame
life a son and his name
in running growing slow
straight as shelve on a slate


hill takes as it gives she trebles in live
daffodils skill to blame only late
much in heart as words fail
touch my face
name came
late


into minds a feeling time it goes to a dark place


in clouds the story grows in clouds the story goes


Phaedra of Phaedra days have gone in the velvet mornings


we still sing you r song still sing your song day’s days long















Author Notes

Some velvet Morning, by Lee Hazelwood,


Male:
Some velvet morning when I'm straight
I'm going to open up your gate
And maybe tell you 'bout Phaedra
And how she gave me life
And how she made it in
Some velvet morning when I'm straight

Female:
Flowers growing on the hill
Dragonflies and daffodils
Learn from us very much
Look at us but do not touch
Phaedra is my name

Male:
Some velvet morning when I'm straight
I'm going to open up your gate
And maybe tell you 'bout Phaedra
And how she gave me life
And how she made it in
Some velvet morning when I'm straight

Female:
Flowers are the things we knew
Secrets are the things we grew
Learn from us very much
Look at us but do not touch
Phaedra is my name

Male:
Some velvet morning when I'm straight
Female:
Flowers growing on the hill
Male:
I'm going to open up your gate
Female:
Dragonflies and daffodils
Male:
And maybe tell you 'bout Phaedra
Female:
Learn from us very much
Male:
And how she gave me life
Female:
Look at us but do not touch
Male:
And how she made it in

A possible explanation for the song is that the alternating male and female parts represent the differences between men and women, especially in regards to sex. The implication is that women know more of this subject and men must learn to respect women in order to understand this knowledge. However, another view posits that the male and female parts represent humanity and nature, respectively. The female parts are evocative of a supernatural setting, perhaps one might associate with the nymphs of Greek mythology. This interpretation seems especially valid, as Phaedra is a character from Greek lore, who, upon being scorned by her lover Hippolytus, commits suicide. Thus, the song may be imploring men to respect the women they love, lest they end up like the classical Phaedra.


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 Reviews of "Phaedra"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 9, 2007
loved it all I was going to comment that it sounds much like Greek Mythology, like the stories of that time and then I read the authors note and there it was I am a lover of this and you did yourself awesome with your part in this tale, enjoyed it much!!!

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Very insppiring and stimulating writing. This poem takes one on a trip to a sublime atmosphere, as its poemization gives the reader wings to imagination. I also enjoyed the author's note and suppporting poem, ~ Some velvet Morning, by Lee Hazelwood.
I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Moving write.....thank you!!

Love Tinka


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