Troubles I know you well as the wind blows hot from hell
sleep and comfort I know you not
for into truth of living death is all I got
rust in iron upon an anvil built
sword of suffer I have up to the hilt
random freedom came once upon a time
her name was Phaedra I claimed her for mine
wrinkle in the wine glass cherry on the vine
softer than heaven this love was to be mine
met her in the fields of a day so long ago
met in the valley just after the first snow
held to my heart she pierced my soul
when we had to part
over time mortal into swells we go
from love to hate and troubles I know
and troubles I know
straight as the crow goes in heaven rows to a place of fate
gate grows on amber fields of snow
Phaedra calls to blame
life a son and his name
in running growing slow
straight as shelve on a slate
hill takes as it gives she trebles in live
daffodils skill to blame only late
much in heart as words fail
touch my face
name came
late
into minds a feeling time it goes to a dark place
in clouds the story grows in clouds the story goes
Phaedra of Phaedra days have gone in the velvet mornings
we still sing you r song still sing your song day’s days long
Author Notes |
Some velvet Morning, by Lee Hazelwood,
Male: Some velvet morning when I'm straight I'm going to open up your gate And maybe tell you 'bout Phaedra And how she gave me life And how she made it in Some velvet morning when I'm straight
Female: Flowers growing on the hill Dragonflies and daffodils Learn from us very much Look at us but do not touch Phaedra is my name
Male: Some velvet morning when I'm straight I'm going to open up your gate And maybe tell you 'bout Phaedra And how she gave me life And how she made it in Some velvet morning when I'm straight
Female: Flowers are the things we knew Secrets are the things we grew Learn from us very much Look at us but do not touch Phaedra is my name
Male: Some velvet morning when I'm straight Female: Flowers growing on the hill Male: I'm going to open up your gate Female: Dragonflies and daffodils Male: And maybe tell you 'bout Phaedra Female: Learn from us very much Male: And how she gave me life Female: Look at us but do not touch Male: And how she made it in
A possible explanation for the song is that the alternating male and female parts represent the differences between men and women, especially in regards to sex. The implication is that women know more of this subject and men must learn to respect women in order to understand this knowledge. However, another view posits that the male and female parts represent humanity and nature, respectively. The female parts are evocative of a supernatural setting, perhaps one might associate with the nymphs of Greek mythology. This interpretation seems especially valid, as Phaedra is a character from Greek lore, who, upon being scorned by her lover Hippolytus, commits suicide. Thus, the song may be imploring men to respect the women they love, lest they end up like the classical Phaedra. |
Very insppiring and stimulating writing. This poem takes one on a trip to a sublime atmosphere, as its poemization gives the reader wings to imagination. I also enjoyed the author's note and suppporting poem, ~ Some velvet Morning, by Lee Hazelwood.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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