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freed
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Thursday, December 8, 2022 Rated "G" by the Author.

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My first take on cleave poetry in form of two Haiku. As per Skeptic's Kaddish blog, you read the left hand first as one poem. Next, the right hand as the second piece. Then, the whole as the third integrating poem. Enjoy the mess.

driven by a dream a vision within thousand possibilities a seeker chained by belief went over the bridge freed by his own mind

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Reviews of "freed"

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on December 9, 2022

Interesting form and lovely poem.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 8, 2022

I'm not fond of highly structured, ultrashort poems. But it's not a mess, I see a clear meaning and I think you followed the rules exactly.

Ron

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