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Old Mountain Joe

by Dadfire — Read all 70 poems by Dadfire

A short story in a poem about a man mostly forgotten

Wednesday, April 19, 2017


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Old Mountain Joe

there is a man they call old mountian Joe
who lives in a cabin way up in the snow
high up in the hills, way back in the cold
where the air is thin and hardly none would go

once known and praised by all around
as the best athlete in our little town 
long before he went off to a war
to fight in a place on another shore

folks talked about him, how he somehow changed
when back from Vietnam he finally came
then folks shamed him with spite in their eyes
some spit in his face when home he arrived

I thought what a shame, this shouldn't be
to despise such a man that went overseas
and risked his life and from home took  leave
to go fight a war to keep others free

I said I must go, so I made a plan
to hike up there and find this man
to climb the rugged hills and see his lot
for a glimpse of this man that the town forgot

I climbed to his spot, where the view was  grand
I looked down and scoured over the low down land
where we all lived, down out of the cold
and rarely got sight of old mountain Joe

I approached the shack, as it came into sight
saw old Joe cutting some wood out back
then I nervously yelled, "Hey mountain Joe,
I've come to visit from the town below"

I was tired and weak from my journey hard
was thirsty and hungry from the miles I trod
old Joe just grinned and gave me a nod
but my eyes were afixed on the axe in the yard

but we finally sat and shared some food
he began to tell of things that he only knew
how he came up high to live in the sky
how he'd wished many times that he had died

said he'd fought by the side of the bravest man
so long ago in that far away land
they were brothers in battle, as they fought along
beside each other to see the other home

then one day together, way out on partol
said he spotted a sniper way down by the road
bullets started flying their way all around
no time for cover that could be found

he went on to tell how this man gave his life
who  covered him up, to stop the bullets path
with the man as a shield, he said " I survived,
but there laid your dad as I watched him die"

he said he was taken and years went by
being kept as a prisoner though yet alive
and spent every day wishing he was the one
who had taken those bullets and his life was done

Joe told me the story as he went on
how his brother in arms had a son back home
said my dad was a hero, his body shipped home
was ashamed he had lived, while my dad was gone

I sat and I cried while this story he told
then I hugged an old man that I'd never known
now I've lived all these years but I finally know
the story of a man called old mountain Joe

I often still visit this man I now know
who lives in a cabin way up in the snow
high up in the hills, way back in the cold
where the air is thin and hardly none still go

where still lives a man called old mountain Joe

 



 


 

 

  

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 20, 2017
I really like your story of heroics and family. Great American stuff.

I don't understand the emphasis, though, on returnees from Vietnam being "spit on and yelled at." Yes, there were a couple of widely broadcast and repeated incidents, but for the most part, most Vietnam veterans came home to family and friends and resumed their war interrupted lives.

From my memory of those times, there were two paths… The draft was an interruption in young men's lives that was not taken lightly by those drafted. And, unfortunately, they tended not to have all of the deferments that were granted to college students like me, those that were married, owned businesses or farms, and/or were rich. These people came home disillusioned by what they had lost by being drafted in the first place--sidetracked in their lives and basically unprepared to get good jobs.

The second group were patriotic and gung-ho to do good. They weren't highly educated or they would've known better. They came home disillusioned because it wasn't what they thought it would be from what they heard from World War II family and friends stories, unless they were in the elite officers corps or something glamorous like a pilot.

Both of these groups suffered drug and alcohol use during the long, boring waits between intense violent action. They suffered PTSD, just now being learned how bad it was.

I was against the war even though I thought it would've been great to be a jet pilot. I never looked down upon a returning veteran and the thought of spitting on them was really abhorrent to me. If anything, I pitied them for their disillusionment. Most of the vets that I met in college were on the government payroll and doing quite well. I didn't hear any of them complaining although they were older than most of the other students and stuck pretty much to themselves.

Ron

Reviewed by Dadfire
Reviewed on April 19, 2017
Thanks for all the comments. I rewrote the first verse in present tense since at the end of the story, I wrote I was still visiting the guy. I had one letter left off the end of a word anyway and needing fixing in that verse. thanks for the compliments though
Dan

Reviewed by Lois Blanco (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2017
Brought tears to my eyes. When written words can do this, it's very powerful. Lois

Reviewed by William Munsell
Reviewed on April 19, 2017
I agree with Jane , I want to hear the song.
Also, the "unwelcome" home was a sad tale for many returning Vets.
Thanks for a great story even though it's a tear jerker.

Reviewed on April 19, 2017
I caught the rhythm right our of the shut!!! There is a very possible song here.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 19, 2017
Utterly fascinating, very devastating. Very well presented, and most moving. John

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on April 19, 2017
How very sad this story, yet it 's full of strength and promise, we are so human aren't we? I thank God for that, thank you for sharing this touching poem, a hero indeed, I believe both mean were heroes by their own right, xo

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 19, 2017
Excellent! Many men came back from wars feeling much the same way . . . It brings to mind my Uncle Mac who survived the Bataan Death March and prison in China. Yes, he physically survived, but mentally he died. He was never the same.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on April 19, 2017
What a great story. Although Vietnam was a war that should never have been fought, it took America a long time to welcome our soldiers back.


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