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That Little Hand of Mine

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fond memories of growing up on a farm

Monday, April 6, 2015


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When I was just a little lad
I remember all so well.
The place of  my beginnings,
of things that I will tell.

I often rode with father
as we drove around the fields.
We passed a tractor going slow
as we came around the hill.

The cotton then grew tall like trees.
It stood above my sight,
like clumps of snow upon a roof
in bowls so soft and white.

He stopped the truck,
and we got out, the dirt it smelled so fine.
He put a piece of cotton,
in that little hand of mine.

And Dad would say, we better leave,
'cause supper's on the stove.
We climbed back in and headed home,
just ole Dad and me.

Of others he looked over,
for the man who owned the ground.
Of Dad he must have trusted much,
as Dad was always there.

I remember Mama,
her apron always on.
At home she stayed, no where to go,
her work was never done.

She cleaned and cooked and sewed the clothes,
some she made by hand.
When day was done and Pa came home,
I didn't understand.

Not much we said, not much we did.
I guess the day was done.
I was put to bed, as Mama said,
I'll see you in the morn'.

I fell asleep to quiet dreams,
of fields so white and fine,
as I grasped onto the cotton
in that little hand of mine


 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 3, 2016
What a nice trip down memory lane. The images were good and I could see what you wrote....M

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on February 17, 2016
This is precious and takes me back to years I spent on grandpas farm

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on January 15, 2016
Wonderful, precious and sacred memories Dear Daniel :-)

Reviewed by Lynda Talley
Reviewed on May 24, 2015
Brother, I had forgotten this poem, but now reread I can see the same fields of cotton and smell the fresh tilled earth you have recounted here. You have a talent of putting memories to free verse. Maybe you should consider a published collection?

Reviewed by Joel Sattler
Reviewed on May 17, 2015
Nice!

You might consider posting this on the songwriting site kompoz.com

Start a project with it and upload a pdf file for it.

Reviewed on May 3, 2015
I absolutely love this nostalgic poem. Brought back memories to me. Wonderfully penned in form and message.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 7, 2015
Your poem has such a musical ring to it. And the story is so poignant. I could just see a song written about that "Little Hand of Mine."

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on April 6, 2015
A wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 6, 2015
I like nostalgic pieces, and this is a good one.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 6, 2015
Yep. My grandparents worked their farm twenty-four-seven. He plowed and did what was to be done outside the house, grandma (apron always on) did what was to be done within the house and yard. Their yard was hard-packed earth, didn't mow it, you swept it. She cooked on an old wooden stove. Go out in the yard, wring a chickens neck, cooked that sucker up with potatoes and white gravy, fresh vegetables from her own garden, and the best damn teacakes you could ever want to taste.


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