Nicely written--a poem we should all take to heart. I worry about the younger generation that never takes in ALL the beautiful things that you mention.

rege

Reading this poem is like drinking herbal tea,it soothes the soul and the mind.It warms the heart and cleanse the spirit.Great poem,I love it,take care

Edwin

Pier,

You write with a confidence that is unmatched - an outstanding poem! I love your work!!

Hugs,

Lance

It is lovely! I'm refreshed! shhhhh! (smiles) angi

Wow! I stopped reading poetry at AD because it mostly sucks. Yours? Not so much :) I gotta spread the news.

Loved this and the message!

Blessings Pier,
~Gwendolyn

What a great and timely message in the "hustle and bustle" of today's world.

You should charge for your services, Pier.
I hear blood pressures dropping all around me.
I hear parents now taking the time to really listen to
their children's expressions.
And in the silence I hear husbands and wives and
significant others pausing to actually listen to one another.

What a treasure: To be still and share the silence.

Wonderful!

Richard

Listen to the Whispers and Rejoice! Happy Birthday Pier~
Great penning! Thank you for sharing the stillness of life in "Shhhh!"
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Beautiful write Pire
It was a pleasure to read your wonderful thoughts
So gentle and smooth as silk,
the music just perfect for the imagery mood.
Thank You

Love & paece
William

Be still...and know.

How truly refreshing is your poetry......beautiful music, too!

Happy Resurrection Day!
Blessings, Rhonda

got to take a break Pier, great poetic in relation, calm and cool

Soulful. tnx

Pier...this is outstandingly lovely!
The composition reminds me a a heartbeat...or pulse as Jude expresses below...it is almost like an interal chant used during meditation...

i like the pulse of your voice in this inspiring and well written poem ...

This is great counsel for the moment; take a breather and feel life. I love it, Pier. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Wise thoughts of profound existential reflections. A beautiful composition to enchant and inspire.

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Lovely poem...Hugssssssssss

Pier,

*whispering* i love it--beautifully penned ode to s o l i t u d e and quiet reflection!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Pier, so good to see you, this is beautifully written, a joy to read!

Eileen

This is lovely, soft and flowing, Pier. I enjoyed this one beginning to end. Very well done -- I love the repetitions.
Love,
CJ

okay!!

Shhhhh....no more!!

I LOVE IT...:))) !!

Love Tinka

I love the still of the night, cuddled up with my darling. Shhhhhhhh

OK.(Andy tippy toes out quietly)

Great photo which is my cuppa Earl Grey all righty... I won't stay long cos, being an enormous natterbox, I will just ruin the whole ambience of this. BUT, safe to say I like the thrust of this immensely - it's direction and specificity, Pier, and to me it seems so fizzing that indeed you need to utter the dictum to "Be still" otherwise all that energy could just get tooooooooo exciting! Makes ME feel highly energised, anyways... Is the coda "... and know that I am God"? If so, I'm sure He'd like the enthusiasm here! TY Kate xx

Love this.......write
I'm resting any chance I get...

I'm being still -- appreciating, reflecting, enjoying, savoring! Thanks Pier! I needed your reminder! Good poem!