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A kind of ending
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Saturday, May 5, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I hate this about relationships

"A kind of ending"

 

 

 

 

I'm an emotional specticle

of fire

turning into puddles

of water

as you won't stay warm

 
I look into your eyes and
don't see me in your rivers
- I don't see the rivers, baby… 
flowing in your I's
 
Good if I possessed wings
but I don't
- seems I'm falling
under our dark moment
lowered by six
without a calming flower
 
I sink unevenely by
the heaviness of this
precarious headstone
…  my love and you 
 
 
 
 
 
Written by Darkest Angel 
Written May 5, 2018

 

 
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 Reviews of "A kind of ending"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 30, 2018
Great write, Dark.You write as I do, but with more eloquence. I'm grateful you are back also.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 24, 2018
I can relate to this DA. Take care. Love, peace, and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on May 10, 2018
This is a heartbreaking poem. The painful feeling is well-expressed.

Sandie
Reviewed by Darkest Angel
Reviewed on May 9, 2018
It's all too real, but I fight to not believe it is happening. I just love her so much that I'll go down like a dwindling comet until I hit the the maximum resistance unfortunately.
Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on May 7, 2018
It's time to say goodbye when you don't see yourself in her eyes. I like that image.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 6, 2018
So good to read you again. Like the others I hope this isn't from a real relationship with only a poetic rendering
.

Ron
Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on May 6, 2018
Even when a relationship ends, it still lives on inside of us.if it doesn't torment us, it's a blessing. If not, it's a curse.
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
Reviewed on May 5, 2018
This is definately your style of writing. I sincerely hope this ending you speak of is just a creative venting of sorts because it sounds horrendous, scary and crushing to say the least. Nice to see you posting.
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