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Enchantress
by Mario W Vitale → (All Poetry by Mario W Vitale)
Tuesday, July 25, 2017    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A deep look at love


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Enchantress

Love: You can't shut it out, like the crashing of a wave,
Once it starts there is no stopping it
So I try to enchant you with my smile,
But I'm afraid it's just not your style

I try to impress you with my brain,
But nothing changes- it's all the same
I try to reach out, but you're not there;
My lonely heart grabs at air

My heartstrings reach out and cling to yours
My heart an eagle, my heart soars
Then the drawbridge goes up and the walls come down
My abysmal heart is left with a frown

I try to still my hearts ache;
My love I'll give, your love I'll take
Why won't you just be at my side ?
To love and to hold, to talk and confide

But you never notice- you don't care !
To love me, you wouldn't dare
The stars shine down on my empty soul
If you would just love me it would make me whole.

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 Reviews of "Enchantress"
Reviewed by Alan Cook
Reviewed on August 22, 2017
Unrequited love, a universal problem. At least we all have company. Well stated.

Alan

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on July 27, 2017
Love will never flare
if the chemistry is not there.

And if anybody knew what attracts lovers to each other and they could put it in bottles and sell it on ebay, they be richer than Bill Gates.

Good poem, very enjoyable read.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on July 26, 2017
your lines here are exquisitely paired with rhyme and content, how sad when love is not reciprocated and the heart is made to wait...
well done dear Mario. Thank you for sharing, and have a great day xo

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on July 26, 2017
You've beautifully expressed the sentiment of unrequited love.


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