I could give you
a synchronized silence
a symmetrical discussion
of hands
iris to iris, browns to browns
fade together
co-existent consolation
an adorned togetherness
never bright enough
to drown a life
lost
about to lose
my offer
a shared peace
never bright enough
to inspire the void
Beautiful word play and interchanging of mood and feeling
Peter
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
I found this very well penned and expressed many can relate.
"iris to iris, browns to browns
fade together
co-existent consolation
an adorned togetherness
never bright enough
to drown a life "
“Being a couple yet free is our next challenge on the evolutionary ladder. This book successfully helps us unravel the myths that block that achievement. It does it with warmth, with readability, and with balance. It recreates everyday problems and
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Beautiful word play and interchanging of mood and feeling
Peter
"iris to iris, browns to browns
fade together
co-existent consolation
an adorned togetherness
never bright enough
to drown a life "