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Longshot
by Brett A Salter → (All Poetry by Brett A Salter)
Friday, August 27, 2021    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Longshot

I rise to my feet along with the rest of the room
Colors flash before my eyes
Temporarily blurring the vision I hold close
I hear shouts
Are they the good kind or
The ones I dread to witness?

The racing colors are long gone now
Disappeared into the early evening dusk
I shrink back into my chair
Washed away of color as well
An eternity elapses as I blink
The heaviest eyelids I’ve ever known

Nostalgic smells of victory
Enlaced in that of flat beer
And sordid cigarette butts
I’m breathing, but can’t remember
If I ever did before
I think I’m going to be sick
  

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 Reviews of "Longshot"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 28, 2021
Yes, the consequences of losing. And now, the consequences of all of the dog tracks shutting down. Recently I've taken to singing "Camp Town Races" a little ditty from two centuries ago.

"Went to the races with my hat caved in, came back home with a pocketful of tin…"

Ron

Reviewed on August 27, 2021
A very dreadful visual image, and then the feeling of loss you have expressed so well.

Nostalgia can be a pretty bad thing because it deprives you of living your life in the present reality.

Sandie


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